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emeraldstag

HP: The Beastly Beauty Chapter Two

Jan 22, 2009 23:17

Title: Chapter 2 - To The Rescue
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: R
Genre: Drama/Romance/Friendship
Characters: Harry Potter, Hestia Jones, OFC, Lavender Brown, Ginny Potter
Pairings: Harry/Ginny/Lavender
Words: 5,422
Summary: Harry experiences the Creature Club
Archived: Fanfiction.Net, Ficwad.com
Story Links: ( First Chapter) - (Next Chapter)
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char:harry potter, fanfiction, char:ginny weasley, length:limited, pairings:harry/ginny/lavender, char:hestia jones, fandom:harry potter, fic:harry potter:beastly beauty, creativity, char:lavender brown

Comments 4

htbthomas January 25 2009, 20:06:26 UTC

Excellent chapter! I was really gripped the whole time Harry was in the club, just as disgusted as Harry and really hoping he would find her quickly!

emeraldstag January 26 2009, 22:13:30 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, I tried to portray the Club as big and the atmosphere overwhelming with Harry in the dark and not knowing how he was going to find her. :)

sarahol1 March 20 2009, 14:34:03 UTC

You did a really great job with this! The atmosphere of the club was so detailed and rich; it was like being in there. I hope you continue this story because the premise is very interesting. Keep up the great work!

emeraldstag March 21 2009, 05:33:16 UTC

Thank you! I really wanted the chapter to be a bit of a mystery and I thought the best way was to really get into the place Harry was at. I'm glad that came through.

I'm actually starting up on the next chapter now, I just got bogged down with a few other fic challenges and a little Potter burnout so I put it to the side for a month or so. I look forward to coming back to this story because I've been getting great response from it everywhere. :)