Lunch Run 1/1

[emerald_green37]

First in a series of five short one-shots that will make up a bingo. This one is gen, we'll see where the muse takes the rest of the series.

Comments

[ncisrox]

Wow. Short but powerful. This really draws a picture. I can see this playing out as I read it. That ending is terrifying. Really well done.

[emerald_green37]

Thank you, it was fun to write, forcing myself to pack it all into as few words as possible.

[honor_reid]

That was very brutal story. You packed in a lot of action and angst into a one shot.

Very well done! Thanks!

[emerald_green37]

Thank you, that's what I was going for. Sometimes I need to remind myself that not every story needs to be 50k+ words.