Paradox of Love 16/17

[emerald_green37]

Finally on their last morning there, Gibbs was the first one awake. Smiling to himself, he stealthily shifted around and raised up on one arm to watch the other two men sleep in the predawn light. Tim was in the middle, facing him, while Tony was spooned up against Tim. Both men looked so peaceful and content it almost took his breath away.

Comments

[ncisrox]

What a fantastic chapter! I'm so glad Gibbs and McGee were able to move on to some seriously hot sex, umm, I mean past their previous experience, yes that's definitely what I meant.

Gibbs breakfast was hysterical. I am glad that he appreciates the changes in both guys, but especially Tim as the weekend progressed. I love that he had to pull off the road to contemplate things instead of waiting to get home.

Tony and Tim have a sweetness together in this story that I find completely irresistible. And now on to the final chapter with visions of sequels dancing in my head.

[emerald_green37]

Past their previous experience, yep, absolutely.

Tony and Tim have a sweetness, that's for sure, and the three of them have bonded in a very deep and profound way. The sex wasn't bad either, but it's the emotional ties that I'm the most proud of. I'm glad you saw that realization in Gibbs, too.

[ncisrox]

That's one of the things I like best about the way you write. The emotional connection is always of the primary importance. For me, that's the glue that holds a story together and something you do incredibly well.

[emerald_green37]

Thank you. The emotional connection is very important to me, especially in slash. If there's no deeper connection between the characters, then it's just porn. Sometimes I want to write a simple porn story, but usually I want to do more.