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emerald_green37

Camping with Gibbs 6/?

Nov 11, 2013 18:32

"Good morning."

Tony had been sleeping extremely well so Tim snuck out of the tent to let him sleep a while longer only to find Gibbs getting the fire and the coffee started.

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ncis, gen, camping, pg-13

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ncisrox November 12 2013, 03:43:11 UTC

You are on a serious role and I am loving every minute of it! First two chapters of Laboring and now another Camping chapter? Seems to me like you are making really good progress towards your 50,000 words in November goal.

I love that Tony and Gibbs are tag teaming Tim without even realizing it, and trying to make him fully embrace his youngest son/little brother place in the family. So, wrong guy at the other campsite? Can't wait to see how that plays itself out. I love Tony subtly reminding Fornell to spend time alone with Emily.

Love this story. We, I love all your stories.

emerald_green37 November 12 2013, 03:55:28 UTC

Thanks. Yeah, I've been cranking it out again. I should be at about 16,000+ words tonight. I get a little behind over the weekends because of work, but make it up during the week. Next chapter of Laboring should go up tomorrow.

A little more thoughtful and quiet chapter today, but more humor will come.

ncisrox November 12 2013, 04:45:22 UTC

I like the way the thoughtful and quiet lends balance to the humor. It's a really nice mix.

Another chapter of Laboring? I am so excited!

emerald_green37 November 12 2013, 05:00:38 UTC

Thank you. I like playing with that balance. Yep, finishing up another chapter of Laboring and actually also the last chapter of Remnants. Busy Emerald is busy.

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honor_reid November 12 2013, 06:07:47 UTC

Great chapter. I love that Tony waited until their conversation was over before getting up, it shows a thoughtfulness that we don't get to see enough on the show.

I really hope Tim can eventually trust Gibbs as a father figure in his life.

It was all very nicely done! Thanks!

emerald_green37 November 12 2013, 16:47:50 UTC

I can see him clinging to Tim and Gibbs much more now that Ziva has left them. He's determined to not let another family member slip away and needs to have Tim fully realize his place in that family.

Glad you're enjoying it.

ahavia November 12 2013, 06:38:23 UTC

What a rich and interesting story! So many elements brought together. Thanks.

emerald_green37 November 12 2013, 16:48:47 UTC

Thank you! Haven't seen you for a while, but I'll be keeping you busy now.