Comments | emerald_dawn: 052. Angst

emerald_dawn

052. Angst

Jan 19, 2006 19:09

The Mistakes We Make
PG-13
418 words
Stargate SG-1
Prompt (052) Angst
Jack, Sam, Daniel
After Daniel leaves, Jack falls apart.
Part 3 of the Betrayal Series

( Jack didn't spent much time looking at the closed door... )

sg-1, daniel jackson, fic, betrayal series, jack o'neill, het, slash, samantha carter, slash_100, j/d

Comments 9

no_eden January 20 2006, 03:45:36 UTC

"And now, he’d screwed that up. Because he’d had too much to drink and Carter had been flirting with him and worn a sexy shirt."

Hark. Harkidy hark hark.

And: "He finally looked her in the eyes and saw confusion and, deeper, hurt. But her eyes were the wrong shade of blue, and he didn’t care."

Awwwwwwww... ;_; Now that line was stunning.

So. Another sequel? In which happiness ensues? Possibly?

emerald_dawn January 20 2006, 03:50:29 UTC

Well, there IS another sequel. Happy? > >;;

What's the "hark" supposed to mean?

no_eden January 20 2006, 04:09:38 UTC

Yes, yes, very happy! Will die in peace, etc.

It's a kind of laugh. Like the Chancellor's laugh in Discworld: Hat. Hat hat hat hat.

gayalondiel January 20 2006, 13:03:52 UTC

and I found it! trust me to be preemptive (I really should pay attention when someone points me to a link

gayalondiel January 20 2006, 13:05:26 UTC

Again, brilliant! I'm hoping there's going to be more after the last link...

emerald_dawn January 20 2006, 21:22:03 UTC

Yes, I'm just not sure when it'll come.

emerald_dawn January 20 2006, 21:21:26 UTC

Heh yes. Thanks for commenting.

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emerald_dawn January 20 2006, 21:25:25 UTC

Well, he did just screw up monumentally, so it would have to be rough. Thanks for commenting. ;)

teddibear June 16 2006, 19:52:07 UTC

I think that saying on the shot glass just about killed me like it killed him. OW. And Sam, you bitch. You took advantage. Grrr. Jack, you IDIOT. Don't you know they ALWAYS find out?

This hurts. I hope there's some sort of happy ending coming but if not, I'll take the angst. I like angst.

Can I have a shot glass like that? What a clever gift.

And love the comment on the eye color. Wrong shade of blue INDEED.