Passing [Fullmetal Alchemist][PG][Ed/Al, Al/OFC]

[emerald_dawn]

Passing
PG
Fullmetal Alchemist
Ed/Al, Al/OFC
At the dinner table I’m too concerned at first with eating, with drinking, with savoring these sensations I’ve lacked for five years, that I don’t immediately notice you watching me.
WARNINGS: Incest, angst
Notes: Companion piece to Gone from Al's PoV.  I recommend you read that first, but it really isn't

Comments

[sexkitten426]

I'n sitting here crying; this is even sadder than Ed's POV.

"How is it I’m jealous of a suit of armor?" "Perhaps you were the cost of my body after all." "Gardens are easy to fix." <-- These lines are short but contain so much more meaning than words alone. Brilliant!

[emerald_dawn]

this is even sadder than Ed's POV

Really? What gave you that impression? I figured the opposite as I was writing, because Al actually finds happiness and love again. Ed's just miserable and tormented.

And you picked out some of my favorite lines, too. :)

[mihaelnate]

it's sadder because he's married because he hurts so. bad. He's not just sad, he's almost broken. Ed's story? It was his fault.

[kirathaune]

Ugh, this was beautiful. Heartbreaking, but beautiful.

Thanks for sharing!

[emerald_dawn]

Oh, man, I'm so sorry you have a stomach ache! :( But thank you for reading, I was definitely going for "heartbreaking" and "OMG FEEEEEELS D: " with this one.