Fic: Crépuscule, 4/4 - Completed

Jun 07, 2009 22:10

Title: Crépuscule, part 4
Author: emei 
Rating: R
Length: about 2300 words.
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur, Gwen/Morgana subtext, past Merlin/Will.
Warnings/spoilers: Modern AU. No specific spoilers. Some darker themes.
Summary: Paris!AU. Merlin is a struggling writer living in a bookstore. Arthur's an exchange student. If they hadn't met, Arthur's life would have ( Read more... )

crepuscule, au, merlin, fic

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phantomreviewer June 7 2009, 20:53:07 UTC
*Goes to read*

Read.

Oh my poor heart.

Absolutly beautiful, as ever!

Almost a sad ending but not quite...

Wondeful!

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emei June 7 2009, 21:09:20 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it.

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phantomreviewer June 7 2009, 21:10:27 UTC
I love it. This fic is one that I'll be coming back to over and over again!

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emei June 7 2009, 21:15:55 UTC
That makes the author very, very happy!

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fresica June 7 2009, 21:02:16 UTC
Oh my god, this story is going into my memories. If there were some way to keep it at the top of that list, I would. It's beautiful and touching and so real. I loved every single second that I was reading it.

Best parts, by far: (by which I mean the parts that brought tears to my eyes, then made me actually cry them.)
For loving and being loved, never in such big words but none the less completely, and then getting himself killed. Arthur burns with anger at what Merlin has been left with - the hard knowledge of how Will bled to death on a dirty pavement a cold February evening. The absolute loneliness of it. For both of them.

and

Love grows, changes. Keep breathing and a thousand paths lie open.

This was easily one of the best Merlin AUs I've read. Despite the length, it gives such an impression of depth and history that it could qualify as epic. It's absolutely gorgeous, seriously.

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emei June 7 2009, 21:15:00 UTC
I, oh, I'm so very pleased that this managed to touch you. Especially that the part with Arthur thinking about Will did. And smiling madly at the "epic". Thank you so much!

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sweetestel June 7 2009, 21:19:18 UTC
Aww, beautiful ending and marvelous fanfic ! I like that Merlin needs time to understand that he finally needs to tell the world about Will. And I also loved the way Arthur just waits for him to talk about what's upsetting him so much, he knows how to deal with Merlin, not to make him feel oppressed. Lovely.
I hope to read more from you soon, because your style is gorgeous !

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emei June 7 2009, 21:30:32 UTC
Thank you! Glad you like the dynamic between them. :)
And Merlin has gotten its claws deep into my brain, so I will definitely write more in this fandom. It's just irresistible...

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sweetestel June 7 2009, 21:34:44 UTC
Glad to hear that ! :D

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_profiterole_ June 7 2009, 21:21:14 UTC
It's beautiful, but also very sad. *huggles Merlin*

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emei June 7 2009, 21:31:48 UTC
Merlin needs a lot of hugs. But he has Arthur now, and Arthur will huggle him lots. All better! ;) Thank you for reading and commenting!

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emei June 7 2009, 21:32:22 UTC
Yes, this is the end. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

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