The New Neighbor

Jul 09, 2014 13:50


Title: The New Neighbor

Category: Supernatural

Characters: OFC, Dean Winchester

Rating: G

Pairings: none

Summary: In small towns like Lebanon people talk and my little grocery store was the center of the town's gossip. And Dean was the most exciting thing that had happened here in years.

Disclaimer: Not mine, I'm just playing with other people's toys.
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season 8, outsider pov, original characters, dean winchester, bunker, one-shot

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Comments 35

strgazr04 July 10 2014, 03:06:53 UTC
I loved every word of this. I found myself reading with a smile on my face. This is precious. Beautiful insight to do. Would you ever consider doing more or maybe a companion piece about Sam?

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emebalia July 10 2014, 10:15:57 UTC
This is a oneshot but I'd never say never ;)
Thanks.

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phyllis2779 July 10 2014, 05:28:13 UTC
It's a terrific story, with a great OC POV. It also made me miss my grandma's apple. No one makes them the way she did, with lots of apples and very little sugar. Not at all the way most apple pies are made. Of course, none of us got the recipe because she never used one.

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emebalia July 10 2014, 10:18:14 UTC
I love the outsider POV, I can't help it.
Nobody makes them like grandma ;)
Thank you.

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freya922 July 10 2014, 06:29:04 UTC
I love outsider POV stories, and this was a treat. I hadn't even considered how the boys staying in one place would lead to small town gossip! Really enjoyed this!

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emebalia July 10 2014, 10:19:29 UTC
It only seemed logically ;)
Thanks.

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askellington July 10 2014, 12:09:59 UTC
I love outsider POV so much--I'm glad I saw this at the newsletter and clicked on it. Margret was instantly likeable, and knew a good guy when she saw one. Loved their interaction!

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emebalia July 10 2014, 15:26:27 UTC
Margret was fun ;)
I love playing with the outsider POV, have a look at my other stories, if you like.
Thank you.

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askellington July 10 2014, 21:15:51 UTC
thank you! well written outsider pov is like finding a box of truffles *and* a cup of coffee!

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grean July 11 2014, 13:34:47 UTC
Beautiful.

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emebalia July 11 2014, 13:58:36 UTC
Thank you.

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