Before he cheats

Feb 22, 2008 23:00

Title: Before he cheats
Pair: Yunchun, tiny Yoomin

Rating: PG
Summary: You thought he was cheating on you but for your surprise it was the other way around.

A/N: I read it and re-read it and I couldn’t spot errors, if you see some PLEASE point it out. I like seeing what I miss and learn to correct it, so DO PLEASE correct me if something is wrong.

What you saw just left you frozen cold in your car seat. )

yunchun, yoomin, dbsk, shot:before he cheats, yoochun, yunho

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toma_love February 23 2008, 03:30:57 UTC
SPOTTISH

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emda February 23 2008, 03:32:38 UTC
LOL read it LOL

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toma_love February 23 2008, 03:33:29 UTC
muahahah it's mine damnit, its mine. i liked it very much mi amor. mucho mucho si! but i liked how it ended up being the other way around. and you set up the situation wonderfully with the details and everything. yay for emmy ah

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emda February 23 2008, 03:35:39 UTC
thanks... man I thought it will turn out so... Blah cuz I just sit an write it in like 30 min before leaving my house and with my mom telling me to leave already that I was late. Glad that it came okay. Im now typing a old Jaesu I wrote like a month ago LOL

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realitywaiting February 23 2008, 03:30:59 UTC
FIRST! HA! Back later to read, i'min the middle of writing something! XD

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realitywaiting February 23 2008, 03:31:55 UTC
Oh POO! MISSED!

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emda February 23 2008, 03:33:28 UTC
huh? missed what?

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emda February 23 2008, 03:37:20 UTC
oh I see... dont worry... Im just not gonna see Toma's comment... *give you a BIG hug* YOUR FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gives you chocolates*

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changminiminmin February 23 2008, 04:08:15 UTC
porque solo un poco de yoomin?

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emda February 23 2008, 04:10:26 UTC
porque lo escribi pensando en Yunchun... y un poco de Yoomin por que Min era la pareja real de Chun. No te preocupes pronto escribo mas Yoomin

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changminiminmin February 23 2008, 04:11:19 UTC
siii yoomin <33333 gracias

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emda February 23 2008, 04:14:27 UTC
pero dije pronto... no en los proximos minutos o horas... como sea chekea si subo algo que diga Yoomin

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foolishlovexo February 23 2008, 05:06:39 UTC
YAH!

You! Wrote! YunChun! & YooMin!

(My favorites! *tackles*)

BRB!~~~

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emda February 23 2008, 05:09:11 UTC
LOL... yeah I write... Yunchun and Yoomin at once check LOL*hugs*

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foolishlovexo February 23 2008, 05:14:03 UTC
I IS BROKEN NOW!

I hopes you are happy now!

Boo.Hoo.

T___________T

Chunnie no! but yes! I'm so confused, I want the YunChun yet I want the YooMin too AHH! You make my head explode with thought (now I have urge to write a fic where Yunho cheats and Changmin comforts Chunnie ahaha! But I won't do it... unless the urge never leave me that is XDDD)

I liked this, though I'm not a fan of Yoochun being the BAD one, I liked it, it was a good twist! <333

Love you~~

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emda February 23 2008, 05:19:15 UTC
Go and write a alternative ending of this, you have my support. I'm sorry to make you confuse and broken... seems that I like to make Chun suffer and portray him as the bad one LOL. Thanks to read it love.
I love you too

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kyuushin February 23 2008, 12:36:19 UTC
uwaa...me here to read...^^

ack...poor minnie...
love yunnie...
why chunnie...??

haha i didn't ake any sense with typing those...^^

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emda February 23 2008, 13:31:03 UTC
Well... if those are questions then you make sense. LOL Hope that you like it. Thanks for reading and commenting

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kyuushin February 23 2008, 13:44:09 UTC
hehe....

i love it!!!
i love big bad chun...
i love innocent minnie...
i love how you twist the story around...
i love yunnie for being a third wheel..(somehow that sound wrong)

and i love you for writing this ^^

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emda February 23 2008, 13:52:15 UTC
I love you too babe

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