One teeny critique. The word bubble on the left looks like Mrs. Rochester is the one doing the speaking.
Other than that, very nice, paralleling the dark and mad Mrs. with the small and pale Jane, both in white.
Sorry your bank's giving you problems. I have to figure out how to get reimbursed for something I ordered that never came! Only, I can't find my November statement for some reason, which is making it all very difficult. I am really angry because I ordered a menorah for Hannukah and it never came and they charged me for it.
yeah, I didn't realize that problem with the speach bubble until after I had scanned the finished drawing....
I could use white out and drag the tail of the bubble across Bertha Rochester's body and over closer to Mr. Rochester's mouth...but it would be a drastic alteration... There would be no coming back from that. But it may be the only way to fix the problem....
You should be able to get your statement online, or go into the bank's office and just request a replacement statement... But do it soon, this is already cutting it close for a charge back, most credit card companies give you 60 days from the time of purchase to the time of filing the complaint/request for a charge back!
Dunno if there is an easy fix. My suggestion would be to somehow move the writing over to the left more, maybe make it two lines and then use that space above the Rochesters' heads to extend the tail of the bubble. But, that would involve a lot of reworking, which would suck.
So, honestly, I'd just leave it! It's not that big a deal, and we can all figure it out.
Yeah, I need to get this done ASAP, I just haven't had a chance to get to the bank (it keeps crappy hours) and holidays and laziness and busyness. I need to get it taken care of, or I'm out $20. Not a big deal, but it just pisses me off.
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Other than that, very nice, paralleling the dark and mad Mrs. with the small and pale Jane, both in white.
Sorry your bank's giving you problems. I have to figure out how to get reimbursed for something I ordered that never came! Only, I can't find my November statement for some reason, which is making it all very difficult. I am really angry because I ordered a menorah for Hannukah and it never came and they charged me for it.
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I could use white out and drag the tail of the bubble across Bertha Rochester's body and over closer to Mr. Rochester's mouth...but it would be a drastic alteration... There would be no coming back from that. But it may be the only way to fix the problem....
You should be able to get your statement online, or go into the bank's office and just request a replacement statement... But do it soon, this is already cutting it close for a charge back, most credit card companies give you 60 days from the time of purchase to the time of filing the complaint/request for a charge back!
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So, honestly, I'd just leave it! It's not that big a deal, and we can all figure it out.
Yeah, I need to get this done ASAP, I just haven't had a chance to get to the bank (it keeps crappy hours) and holidays and laziness and busyness. I need to get it taken care of, or I'm out $20. Not a big deal, but it just pisses me off.
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I actually like the speech balloon extending across Bertha's throat, as though she is in restraints....
I hope you can get to the bank today, it would be good to take care of it quickly, it is worth it for $20.
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