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ember_firedrake

[Hawaii Five-0] Steve/Danny - Eyes Wide Open, I Can't See

Jan 13, 2011 23:27

Title: Eyes Wide Open, I Can't See
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count: 2,338
Rating: NC-17
Summary: After a long and exhausting job, Danny realizes something that should have been obvious. PWP.

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Comments 43

huntress69 January 14 2011, 04:54:48 UTC

This fic FTW!! Kudos to you and it goes to Mems.

ember_firedrake January 15 2011, 04:54:57 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

vamysteryfan January 14 2011, 05:24:32 UTC

Okaaay! This completely worked for me in the really good way. Thanks!

ember_firedrake January 15 2011, 04:58:14 UTC

You're welcome! So happy it worked for you.

elayna88 January 14 2011, 05:57:12 UTC

Oh, very hot!

ember_firedrake January 15 2011, 04:59:39 UTC

Thanks!

By the way, love the icon. :) Oh, Steve, is it necessary to stick your ass out quite that far? (answer: yes)

merepersiflage January 14 2011, 06:08:23 UTC

I loved being in Danny's head with you! Very well-written, excellent characterization and dialogue. Great job! Thanks for sharing.

ember_firedrake January 15 2011, 05:21:53 UTC

Thank you for the feedback. Danny's perspective was a lot fun to write. :)

michele659 January 14 2011, 07:00:44 UTC

That was funny and very sexy and very much in character!
I liked the description of Steve's 'doofus face' which is really a "you make me so happy" face,and I loved how Danny was determined not to miss Steve's "orgasm face"!
I enjoyed the dialogue and how they continue bantering even while they're having sex,lol.

ember_firedrake January 15 2011, 05:24:41 UTC

Thank you! For a badass SEAL, Steve really does make a lot of ridiculous faces. :D