[fic] Components of a Man; Xanxus. I can't stop myself anymore >_>

[ember_alda]

I should be working on the second premise of this weeks set for 36 realms but I keep being distracted. Xanxus, why do you do this to me? I can only take so much of your amazingness, leave some me some inspiration for poor Squalo and Yamamoto T_T.

Here it is, everything that built Xanxus up to be what we all know and love.

Title: Components of a

Comments

[stracciato]

the fact that mangas don't cover the complete backstory of a chara is what enables you to create such wonderful interpretations; and that fic of yours is absolutely fantastic <3 gj!

*faves that page*

[ember_alda]

Wow, thanks for the fav! Glad you enjoyed it XD

[didip]

"Despite that mantra, his eyes would not close until dawn."
daww, so heartwrenching.

I love it how you consider his feather and the tail as a crown.
And I can see that you portrayed his mother different this time. Tbh, I like her more in this fic.

As for the rest: wow, just wow!
Yay for a fic about his good qualities *___*

[ember_alda]

You picked out one of my favorite ones...the one about his feathers and tail. I'm glad the parts about his mother don't sound so far fetched. Thanks for the review!

[arieldm]

I really loved your description of the feathers and tail as a crown, and on the whole this is quite a lovely read.

[ember_alda]

Thank you!

[arieldm]

Most welcome!

[selenas_magick]

Why does Xanxus have to be so awesome and distracting?
Ah, this is a question I ask myself quite often!

I love the way you have written Xanxus here. The description of the feathers and tail was amazing, as was the entire story. And Xanxus as a kid... it's so sad, yet he's so cute too. This story was just brilliant.

[ember_alda]

I can see Xanxus being such a quiet, reserved kid, and then when he grows up...whoosh! I'm glad the part with his hair came across so well, it was the easiest part for me to write and my favorite.

[aya_soran]

Wow. and its believable. You write awesome~ Loved #2 and #6 the most~

[ember_alda]

Thank you. I really strive to be IC XD