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Sep 11, 2004 00:57

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if i told you id burn you a CD i have they are done in bags look in your cubbies tomorrow morning and they should be there when i get there............. yea i have to put em in.... people bring me blanks... i need em ASAP!!! need to replace so my dad cant notice!!!!!

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poem guard4ever September 13 2004, 21:53:29 UTC

you are such a good writer! omgosh! their fantastic! i wish i could write like that! here wait can you tell me if this is good??:

In this dreary prison I do wait. Shadows embrace me, hold me near, against the cold in the eternal night. Hear naght exists but myself And thoughts screeming in my mind. Teetering on the brink of insanity.
Yet here I fall, am I pulled back from the dark abyss which swirls below to a warm grasp, strong and comforting.
You are my hero. Save from my fate which lies ahead on broken roads and sharp stones, Only you hold the key to release me from my self-inflicted bondage. Unlock my heart, my soul, for they are yours.
Coldness passes yet not compleat. Warmth fills me in your open arms. Radient enough to melt the snow. Angels would be envious of you. Made of Alabaster pure and whitest ivory. The sun itself kisses your skin.
You are my Hero. I would fight for you and die for you. 'Cause I love you more than time can tell.

please tell me if thats good or not 'cause i don't know.. ~Melanie W.

Re: poem guard4ever September 13 2004, 21:57:02 UTC

the reason that i think that your a great writer is because people can totally relate to your poems, at least i can. and I can totally feel what your feeling when you wrote them. i hope you like mine.:) ~Mel

Re: poem guard4ever September 13 2004, 21:58:04 UTC

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Re: poem teardrops725 September 14 2004, 14:51:01 UTC

thats really good :) i dont write long poems like that, im a short poetic artist these days you should see something i wrote to a friend of mine.... it made me and her cry.... she helped me a lot last year with my writing and shes influenced me a lot :) she also helped me with a few of my insecurity problems that i had last year :)