Fic: Like the Sky is Running (Logan/Veronica) PG-13

[em2mb]

Title: “Like the Sky is Running”
Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica.
Word Count: 1,376
Rating: PG-13
Summary: She matter-of-factly informs him he knows as well as she does this isn’t over. It’s almost as though they take turns walking out on each other.
Spoilers: Season three relationship arch for Logan/Veronica
Warnings: Lacks

Comments

[the_spin]

This is wonderful. I love how you kept it so stark, yet still managed to give it a ton of emotional resonance. Great job, seriously.

[em2mb]

Thanks!

[evie_oh]

This was a really cool look at the relationship between these two over the years, and you wrote it so true to their characters. Nice work :)

[em2mb]

I still would prefer them to just fall into each others' arms, but I can live with on and off so long as it's on again at some point.

Thanks for reading!

[la623]

OH man...this is just so sad. Really good story. It just seems like this would really happen. I like how you did it back and forth...how they take turns...but yet how both know it's not really the end.

[em2mb]

It never really ends for those two. The sooner RT realizes that, the better.

[la623]

LOL...I totally agree with you on that! :)

[midnight_27]

Great job.

I like how you structured this story, it reminds me of the movie 'Closer' in that way; however, I enjoy your ending more.

[em2mb]

I've never actually seen Closer, so any resemblence is unintentional. :) But I'm going to guess it doesn't end well?

[midnight_27]

People told me the movie and play ended differently, so I have no idea what the ending of the play was like, but for the movie, I didn't like the last shot.

[embellished_me]

Wow! Got my fix of dark for today, thank you very much! I love the parallel structure in this, and the way it defines the patterns in their lives they can't seem to break. Lovely stark imagery, too. Thanks for posting!

[em2mb]

I'm glad you liked it!