FIC: Eclipsed By The Sun 10/10 - Another Road Traveled: Promise Filled Sky - R

[elysianfields]

Eclipsed by the Sun 10/10Summary: After facing Lust under the Third Laboratory, Roy and Ed have teamed up to learn more about the homunculi while waiting for the other shoe to drop. In the process they find themselves learning more about each other and seeing past differences that have divided them for years. Will these welcome distractions tear

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[amethyst_koneko]

This has got to be the single best piece of fiction I've read in I don't know how long! Brava! :D The scene on the park bench, every word, perfection! I could feel every ounce of Roy's pain. I could hear every soft spoken heartfelt word Ed said. Every movement, every guesture, every word - I felt like I was right there in the scene with them. :) The only thing wrong with this chapter is there isn't more of it! ^_^

Gracia, or should I say "Gracia", almost had me believing it was her. :) The smile Roy almost saw was my first doubt, the shoes the second. The cleaning lady was Envy wasn't it? Probably laughing his ass off as Roy rushed past. >.< I don't know if your Roy will get a chance to BBQ Envy like Brotherhood!Roy did but if he does, I'm going to enjoy it so very much! *grins evilly* :)

Kudos for making me despise Envy all over again and for making me swoon all over Roy and Ed! ^_^