Surgical Strikes

[elven_wolf]

After reading both reviews to Gypsy Fiddle on OWW, now that jpsorrow added his few cents, I've formulated a bit of a game plan. Joshua's right about Dan. The first thing I'll do is work on that, and just that

Comments

[elven_wolf]

Well after making some cuts and rearranging some stuff the post came down to 4400ish words. I think I'll do some more reviewing this morning.

Thanks!