Critters are awesome

[elven_wolf]

So I got a review on OWW for the first bit of Gypsy Fiddle. She liked it a lot, and offered some good points that I either had missed or was struggling with and finally decided to put out there to see if anybody spotted the issues

Comments

[scbutler]

Go, OWW!

[elven_wolf]

Yay! Thanks for the tip! I'm loving it.