Comments | elsewhere87: Urgency of Love

elsewhere87

Urgency of Love

Mar 27, 2013 08:57

character: merlin/emrys, length: 1/2/3 parter, mood: friendship, mood: angst, character: arthur, type: reincarnation, mood: romance, ✍status: complete, ✒writing: urgency of love, character: guinevere, character: kilgharrah

Comments 5

ella_rose88 March 28 2013, 23:24:12 UTC

God, this was just lovely! I liked how at the beginning you didn't realize Arthur was blind until Gwen mentioned it and I liked your spin with klilgharrh being a dog. You could really feel that Arthur and Gwen's love was just meant to be and no matter what hardships would face them they would always find their way back to each other. All in all, this was a beautifully written piece and I loved it ♥!

elsewhere87 April 15 2013, 05:46:43 UTC

Yay, glad that wasn't obvious about Arthur. Kilgharrah as a dog was just too tempting. That's the feeling I get from their love in the series, always meant to be. Thanks!

fabyenn April 1 2013, 10:12:13 UTC

Once Gwen mentioned it, I scrolled back up to find the little hints sprinkled throughout the story. Nice work Mara :).

elsewhere87 April 15 2013, 05:47:15 UTC

Yay for the hints working. Thanks!

sv_lilah April 19 2013, 04:19:05 UTC

I didn't even realize he was blind until Gwen mentioned it! And then I had to re-read the beginning to see the hints throughout! Well done, my friend!!