Comments | elsewhere87: Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

elsewhere87

Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

Jun 30, 2012 14:21

( Five: Enflamed by the Truth of Emotion and the Flesh )

type: can./alt, character: leon, character: gwaine, character: gaius, type: scene extender, character: hunith, character: percival, character: merlin/emrys, mood: adventure, ✒writing: shatter into...tomorrow, season: 4, mood: angst, ✍status: in progress, character: morgana, character: arthur, length: multi chapters, character: guinevere, character: kilgharrah

Comments 15

tassja_g July 10 2012, 02:28:36 UTC

You're becoming one of my favorite A/G writers. The way you weave in the emotions/ sexual tension/desire/ hurt feelings/ anger/ sorrow everything is brilliant. Subtle and sharp, passionate and exquisitely controlled. I can truly feel the burgeoning feelings of both characters. Brava! I'm excited to read more!

elsewhere87 July 11 2012, 05:42:17 UTC

Wow. That just means a lot. I write based on emotion quite a bit, often listening to music that sets the mood. So when I edit, and sometimes I don't have music playing I'm sometimes concerned if the emotion was too much. I'm just always striving for realism, but I love the drama of movies and all that so I like to incorporate that in, making the characters as true as I can.

So your comment is just precious and I thank you so much for your thoughtfulness.

I'm currently working on the update. :)

imigination July 10 2012, 19:11:54 UTC

I've really enjoyed the story so far, can't wait for the next installment <3

elsewhere87 July 11 2012, 05:44:39 UTC

Ah, you're one of my favorite writers. Means so much you're liking this. I'm working on the update now. Thank you! :)

sv_lilah July 18 2012, 02:26:04 UTC

I have to admit... I love angsty Arwen. The scene where Arthur was being purposely mean tore at my heart strings but in a good way. Can't wait for the next chapter!

mara93 July 18 2012, 14:33:01 UTC

Yeah, I just tend to enjoy writing angst sometimes, kind of challenging too though because it falls apart when it's overdone. I think the angsty side of Arwen's relationship has been partly what's pulled us in. I know it did me. It would have been kind of boring if it was so easy.

It's coming along so the plan is to post it soon...thanks! :)