Comments | elsewhere87: Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

elsewhere87

Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

Apr 01, 2012 17:32

character: merlin/emrys, mood: adventure, ✒writing: shatter into...tomorrow, type: can./alt, season: 4, character: gwaine, ✍status: in progress, mood: angst, character: morgana, character: arthur, type: scene extender, length: multi chapters, character: percival, character: guinevere

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ella_rose88 April 2 2012, 03:22:14 UTC

OMG OMG OMG

I'm so happy you have updated this story! I loved this chapter so very much! I enjoyed the way you handled the A/G reunion so much! I loved Percy and Gwaine looking after Sarya and the Merlin/Huntih reunion was lovely too!

Can't wait for the next chapter! I enjoy your AU of the events of 4x12 and 4x13 much more!

mara93 April 2 2012, 23:15:19 UTC

Yes, this update took a while! I hope to get the next one up sooner, probably will be the last part.

I'm glad you enjoyed how I handled those aspects of the story. I like what the show gave us, (except for the simpleton story) but it would have been nice if they had done more for A/G.

That's why fic is fun though. Thanks!

bluemagicrose April 3 2012, 02:29:45 UTC

Wow. WOW. So much going on. Loved the end with Arthur and Gwen talking about what's happened since they last saw each other. I can't wait until some of this starts to come together, like them all meeting up in Ealdor, what's been happening with Elyan back in Camelot, etc.

I get the feeling that either Sarya's parents will indeed survive, or she'll become the ward of the King and Queen of Camelot. Hoping for ward tbh.

Fantastic update! :)

mara93 April 8 2012, 18:46:40 UTC

Wow, Sarya originally was put in because I knew Arthur would never leave Camelot unless he had a reason of saving a life. Thus Sarya. But that she is cared about by the readers really makes me happy. Her story just kind of grew from that original idea and you guys have made her importance grow when you responded about her.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I have a week of spring break so I'm hoping to have the update of this up this week. :) Happy spring/Easter!