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ella_rose88 February 28 2012, 00:57:48 UTC
Oh no! It ended on a cliffy. I so wanted to see Arthur and the others find Gwen! Don't tell me it ends here!

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mara93 March 4 2012, 13:16:09 UTC
Thanks for commenting, sorry I left you hanging for a bit. Had to get those last parts ready. :)

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sv_lilah March 2 2012, 05:40:21 UTC
Oh my God! This is amazing! Everything about it! To think you got the idea from someone's art... Wow! You are an amazing writer. Please don't ever stop. And especially not now. I can't wait tO see how this one ends!

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mara93 March 4 2012, 13:17:33 UTC
It's just such beautiful emotion conveying art. It was really inspiring for me.

Sorry for leaving you hanging for a bit. Thank you for your comments!

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bluemagicrose March 11 2012, 06:32:07 UTC
Good job Morgana. Let this fight be between you and Mordred and A/G and Merlin. That child didn't do anything. I wish she'd just have enough of his crap and kill him already. And I wish she didn't think that she had to go with Mordred. Damn destiny.

Love that Arthur is thinking about magic in more terms than absolutely right and absolutely wrong. I have faith he'll get there one day. maybe not right after finding Gwen, but he'll get there.

Another great chapter.

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mara93 March 12 2012, 06:25:10 UTC
It was such a balancing act writing Morgana. I desperately wanted to keep her in character, but I also wanted to show that other side of her that the show sometimes hints about. She's not all evil. There is a painful motivation inside that gets her to do what she does. But now it's all mixed up with so much hate that she rarely sees things clearly.

I do think she shared a bond with Mordred and still will whenever/if Mordred comes back. I just feel it will be different than that with Morgause. I could see him as a very strong villain, and one that maybe Morgana will have mixed feelings about.

I realized that if Arthur was going to travel through the cave he would have to know about the magic. It became an emotional thing when he realized Gwen could die if he didn't get to her fast enough. Magic was the only way, meaning he was forced to look at why others might use it.

Thank you so much. :)

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Merlin’s Magic surrie7 May 25 2021, 19:25:32 UTC
Awesome two chapters! Love how you keep the characters true to form. Why don’t they ever listen to Merlin😞I sure hope Merlin tells Arthur about his magic, this would be a good time! My poor Gwen, they need to find her and really soon! Mordred is just plain evil, glad Morgana had a heart for the baby if no one else. I’m not gonna lie, I was sitting here with chills because of the imagery, I was so cold lololol

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