Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

[elsewhere87]

Comments

[bluemagicrose]

Oh, this update hurt my heart. But for the right reasons. Those two. When they get back together it'll be amazing.

Wonderful chapter.

[mara93]

Oh I know, its definitely angsty now. It's emotional to write even, but sets the scene for what's to come.

Thank you!

[marsealove]

I love Gwaine so much. I could really see the Gwaine we know on the show standing up for Gwen the way he did and helping her pack.

I still have no words for Elyan. I know he was just trying to follow protocol, but Gwen is his sister. After everything she's done to help him, if it wasn't for her he wouldn't even be a Knight of Camelot, he uses protocol as an excuse not to come see her off. Totally unacceptable.

Loved Gwen remembering the night Arthur's tunic got stained and her confusion over what happened with Lancelot. There's was just so much pain there. Sigh. I feel terrible for her and Arthur.

I was also pleased to see some minor insight into how the people of Camelot reacted to Gwen after what happened.

I didn't expect this chapter to skip ahead to 4x11, but it was a nice surprise. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for a wonderful update!

[mara93]

I wish we could have seen Gwaine do more on the show. He was the one that I thought of right away who would confront Arthur. He just seemed the strongest to me because he was that way in season three

[metym]

I'm loving it and I love your writing! can't wait for the next part :)

[mara93]

Ah, thank you so much! ^^^^ Pretty AG icon!