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eternal_moonie August 7 2010, 12:22:19 UTC
*hugs*

I totally LOVE it!!!!

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elsewhere87 August 8 2010, 01:57:33 UTC
Ah, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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archaeologist_d August 7 2010, 12:39:34 UTC
Great job of showing how Igraine found out about the spell and how Uther was reacting to it all.

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elsewhere87 August 8 2010, 02:00:12 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to comment! I'm glad you enjoyed Igraine's finding out and Uther's reaction. That was interesting to write. The backstory is so rich...I would love to see more of it on the show. Thanks again.

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oldwickedsongs August 9 2010, 06:22:07 UTC
Lyrical, and heart wrenching; everything flows so easily from the joy to the pain and bitterness of betrayal. I love how you took the time to show everyone as people, without defending or condoning actions.

This is amazing and thank you for it!

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elsewhere87 August 9 2010, 23:19:05 UTC
Wow, thank you! I actually had been feeling a little down lately about lack of fb to my Merlin stories, but then I get all these nice comments. Does a writer's heart good.

And I see you are one too, wonderful!

I'm glad the flow was there. I was concerned because I was jumping from one emotion to another and I wanted it to smoothly blend. So good to hear it came off that way.

I loved putting these characters into this story mainly through Igraine's eyes. Almost everyone on the show is just created in such a rich and complex way. I'm glad it came off as showing them as people because that's what the series gives and that's very important to me. I don't like just black and white. I like to see all sides and when I write I try to do that too.

Thank you for responding!

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