For Psycholullaby: Still Alive

[herongale]

to: psycholullaby
from: Santa
Request: Ed/Ran Fan centric fic
Title: Still Alive

Comments

[eli_artemisia]

Yay! I like the idea of Ran Fan getting an automail replacement for her arm and Ed being able to relate to her because of it.

Now I'm beginning to feel a new sort of pride in the actual automail

I feel like Ed views his automail as a mark of shame, but admiring Ran Fan for doing practically the same thing he did would hopefully give him a new perspective on his situation. He gave up a part of himself for someone he loved, and his automail is a symbol of his devotion to his little brother, just as Ran Fan's would be a symbol of her loyalty to Ling. :D

I also like that she is still very focused on her goal and chastises Ed for putting her before his own goals in this particular instance. Very Ran Fan.

Simple and sweet. Thank you!!!

Much Love,
Marysia

[sky_dark]

Nicely done. I like the way he seems to want to bond over the automail <3

[hieronymousb]

Ooh, I liked this. You did a good job with a rare pairing. I like how you drew parallels between the two, and how Ed analyzed Ran Fan and found that her loss and her devotion put a new perspective on how he viewed his automail. The ending made me smile. Xingian tea! This was a very charming little fic. Thank you!

[velvet_mace]

I like the admiration and understanding Ed shows for Ran Fan.