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[frankie_the_cat]

Although I said this would be the last chapter...I lied. I'm pretty sure that the next chapter will be the last, Unless I make an epilogue. This chapter is about the same size as the last. The reason for that is because if I had kept going with the story in this chapter then it would have gone on for too long

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[frankie_the_cat]

HAh! Damn those rebels to HELL! Come now, I couldn't really make Alphonse betray Edward, they love eachother too much!

Thanks for reading!

I love it!

[oximore]

Kya!!!! I'm so happy to see the chapter 8! Do you know that you're on my "stories alert" on fanfiction.net lol! I just love it and I crave for the next one!!!!

Sorry for my mistakes but I'm french lol

Re: I love it!

[frankie_the_cat]

Thanks for liking it, I'm really anxious to write the next chapter. I'll try to have the next one out soon to feed your craving!

Re: I love it!

[oximore]

Thank you very much! And your fanfiction is really wonderfull! (Well, I want to say many other thing about it but I'm french and y can't find the words in english, sorry about it ^^)

[esteltinuviel]

Yay! Thanks for the new chapter, I love this story. Well written and exciting--I can't wait for the next part to see what happends with Ed and Al.

[frankie_the_cat]

Hey Esteltinuviel! Thanks for liking this story! I havent heard from you in a long time! How have you been?

[frankie_the_cat]

Oh and I forgot to mention that I love your icon!

[esteltinuviel]

Great, and you? Yes, I've been keeping up with this story but my rp community has been taking some of my time (I'm still writing fics, though!).

In fact, I've been thinking it's about time for some Soul Alchemist fanfiction, what do you say? If you have any ideas I'm happy to hear them, or I've been thinking about exploring the lives of Ed and Al before Al left for Drachma. Perhaps another lemon...

And thanks about the icon! My friend sent me the link for the art and I made an icon from it. Very beautiful love going on there...

[armor_of_guilt]

Yes!! Al must not fall for the rebels' tricks! I really hope they get what's coming to them... Ed and Al need to do some serious butt-kicking ^^ Great chapter, I'm so happy that Al does believe Ed. You scared me for a moment back in chapter seven.
Good luck with the rest of the story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

[frankie_the_cat]

Of course Al wouldn't fall for the rebels tricks, because if he did then Ed and Al wouldn't be able too... Oops almost revealed what happens in the next chapter! Thanks for reading and I'll try to have the next chapter out soon!

[armor_of_guilt]

O_O
OMG!! WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN?! XD
Your cliffhangers are almost too mean, good job ^^