7stages: "Bright White"

Nov 25, 2006 01:30

Title: Bright White
Character(s): Roy, Edward, Alphonse ; pairings are one-sided Ed/Winry, Elricest.
Rating: PG for language.
Prompt: Set 2 : 4. Five shades of white.
Word Count: 1352
Summary: A wedding that feels more like a funeral.
Author's Notes: Someone please smack me if I use sin or Christianity again in my 7stages. I am quickly turning into ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fanfiction by author: tomiko_the_muse

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meomnimi November 25 2006, 11:33:23 UTC
;_; really beautifully written!!!!! esp the part when winry recieved the news, and when ed ran away with al...

entirely possible in the anime verse~

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carnimirie November 25 2006, 17:09:25 UTC
"Ignorance isn’t a sin, yet here Winry is, sitting on my list."

I love that line! I also like the part when Winry finds out; that was beautifully written. Also the part where Ed and Al walk away, hand in hand ^^

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aria_dc_al_fine November 26 2006, 14:23:52 UTC
Luv the plot.....i was thinking that ed would end up marrying Winry after all but u twist it and surprise me! Great story!!

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crescent_moony November 26 2006, 23:55:07 UTC
Aww, poor Winry! But I think it's better this way; no one would have been happy if Edward had married her.

Very well written. I enjoyed it! :D

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