OMG!! Okay, so there was a few sniffles for me in the beginning at Al's funeral, but nothing too bad ^^ This was a good chapter, I like how Alex got a little smack in the head (literally too!) and maybe he'll go and give Ed a biiig hug ^w^ Yay! I also liked how a lot of the characters popped up here! And Ed's diary enteries were great, him as a daddy!! A very old daddy, but a daddy nontheless! I felt really bad for Rosie here... she was supporting her family and then everything crumbles. Her and Amy breaking up was the last thing I would've expected, a good plot twist. I can't believe that there's only one more chapter and an epilogue... -sniffle- I love this story sooo much! You must get great inspiration. Well, good luck with the next chapter! ^^
Ah! I nearly forgot! I was wondering, after watching the interaction between Todd, Lisa, and Edward, I was wondering, are Todd and Lisa something like the future versions of Mustang and Hawkeye? I mean... Multare...Mustang... Lisa...Riza... Whatever. Maybe I'm just delusional. I haven't had caffeine or anything... I'm running out of energy...
Oh my god, this is the second to last chapter... That didn't sink in the first time I read the post-chapter note... Crud, that's a scary thought...
You better have some nice Ed and Al kissing and making up in it. *nods*
This was very well-written as always. Todd made me laugh, you wrote him so perfectly.
I love the journal entries too. Very nice... showing Ed as he goes on. Al needs to take the "your soul is still with me" entry to heart I think.
I can't wait to see the next installment, though I'll be sad to see the end of this fic! (other stuff may come, but ends are always sad in long fics, because it means they're over. *nods*)
Only ONE MORE chater? But...But... ;.; Okay -droops-
"I’ve got to go. Our son just came back from another one of his dates-this time with some tramp he said was named “Julie.” I should make sure she left him in one piece." That made me snort. My mom's name is Julie. XD First you use my dad's name then my mom's name (Don't worry, I'm not offended by any of it. Even the tramp thing) I'm not gonna be surprised if you use my name or my sister's name or the name of anyone else in my family.
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I look forward to them!
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Thanks again for reading! XD
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Oh my god, this is the second to last chapter... That didn't sink in the first time I read the post-chapter note... Crud, that's a scary thought...
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You better have some nice Ed and Al kissing and making up in it. *nods*
This was very well-written as always. Todd made me laugh, you wrote him so perfectly.
I love the journal entries too. Very nice... showing Ed as he goes on. Al needs to take the "your soul is still with me" entry to heart I think.
I can't wait to see the next installment, though I'll be sad to see the end of this fic! (other stuff may come, but ends are always sad in long fics, because it means they're over. *nods*)
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XD Happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter!
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"I’ve got to go. Our son just came back from another one of his dates-this time with some tramp he said was named “Julie.” I should make sure she left him in one piece."
That made me snort. My mom's name is Julie. XD First you use my dad's name then my mom's name (Don't worry, I'm not offended by any of it. Even the tramp thing) I'm not gonna be surprised if you use my name or my sister's name or the name of anyone else in my family.
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Glad you're not insulted, in any case. ^_~
*hugs*
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