Comments | elricest: Soul Alcemist Ch. 3

frankie_the_cat in elricest

Soul Alcemist Ch. 3

Jul 21, 2006 17:55

Sorry this took me so long *heh,heh* I've been kina busy the past few days. And that stupid heat wave made it hard to stay in my room because my room is the hottest in my house! I think you'll all like this chapter, things get revealed! *gasp* Hope you like ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

armor_of_guilt July 21 2006, 23:18:10 UTC

OMG... Al looked at Ed in the dream!! Did he see him? Why can't Ed move? Is he a tree? o.O
Heheh, I'm kidding, but this was a great chapter!! We got information, a cute moment in a flashback, some angst, awesome Ed bashing Mustang stuff, and what was with the last thing Ed said to Al... Suspenseful!! Can't wait to read more! Poor lonely Ed though... on a happier note I've gotten used to his short hair, ne! ^^

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armor_of_guilt July 22 2006, 02:21:57 UTC

I know... it's being mean to me... T_T

frankie_the_cat July 22 2006, 03:25:07 UTC

Thank you! I tried really hard to make this chapter worth reading. For some reason I get the feel that it is kind of slow, but maybe that's just me. I love that flashback too, I actually enjoy writing the flashbacks the most. They help progress the story, like for example, Why didn't Ed go with Al on his last mission if he promised he would? Hmmmm, I guess you'll just have to wait and see.

I've gotten used to his short hair too! ;)
Thanks for reading!

meia_krane July 22 2006, 00:12:32 UTC

WoW that was quite a chapter xD so much plot (she loves it) and angst *O*

and there is evrything in here angst fluff cursin and short jokes xD

and know I'¿m really wondering what haapended to al and why did Ed told him he hated him -they had a fight and al went to mission all alone???-

T^T waaa I need to know!

frankie_the_cat July 22 2006, 03:27:08 UTC

Thanks! I kind of had a hard time cramming all that plot in. I hope it didn't feel too rushed? I had a feeling the part where Ed says the last thing he said to Al was he hated him would get people wondering. I really can't wait to write more!

Thanks for liking it! :)

meia_krane July 23 2006, 04:04:11 UTC

well you know how plot is, but it's quite one the one in this fics and no it doesnt feel too rushed that's how life is

and of course that thing is keeping me thinking (she's a plot machine uuU)

I cant wait to see more!

nah you're welcome -hugs-

zed_azrael July 22 2006, 01:00:02 UTC

@.@ No angry explosion to the short jokes?! *gawk*

^^ I love that part about transmuting their teacher, Izumi is very scary. ^.^

frankie_the_cat July 22 2006, 03:29:18 UTC

I know, how could Ed keep his cool!? Just goes to show how broken he is with out Al. :(

I thought it would be funny to think of Izumi as the scariest thing Ed could think of too. Thanks for reading!

rkylo July 22 2006, 02:34:05 UTC

Nice work again! Hope you can put more love scenes between brothers!! *_*

frankie_the_cat July 22 2006, 03:30:23 UTC

Thanks! I want to put more Elricest love in too, but I feel like I must first explain the story. But don't fear, I promise to bring the love in the upcomming chapters! *yay*

yokokitsu July 22 2006, 02:45:34 UTC

I feel like I should say something constructive, but all I can do is gush praise. I'm a horrible review-person! Anyway, another great job! It's a little confusing, but I guess everything will be revealed... Very cute at the end, with almost no spelling errors. (I'm sorry I'm so uptight about the grammar.) Keep up the intriguing style!

frankie_the_cat July 22 2006, 03:33:06 UTC

thank you! I was afraid the flashbacks mixed with the main story might be a little confusing. But like you said, things will be revealed, so keep reading!

Oh and sorry about the spelling errors, I was in a huge rush to edit and post cause I had to leave. And don't worry about being uptight, I'm just glad you care! Thanks for reading!