Skeletons Chapter Seven! (Part II)

Jun 28, 2006 20:35

I told you it was long. ^_^; (I can't believe it was too big to post all together ( Read more... )

fanfiction by series: skeletons, fanfiction, fanfiction by genre: romance/angst, fanfiction by author: moon_maiden36

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hanyo_alchemist June 29 2006, 01:57:58 UTC
...*jawdrop*
Holy. Fucking. Hell.

*is speechless*

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hanyo_alchemist June 29 2006, 02:01:44 UTC
Oh yeah, and FIRST COMMENT HOES!.

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crescent_moony June 29 2006, 02:08:33 UTC
(What's the big deal about first comment? I don't get it...)

Anyway, yes. HFH. Well put. ^_~

X3

*cuddles her uke*

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hanyo_alchemist June 29 2006, 02:20:12 UTC
(I don't get it either. =D)

*cuddles back*

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meia_krane June 29 2006, 02:18:17 UTC
OMGWTF !!!! this wasnt what i was expectin' and I' dying to know whta happened to Al seniior xD poor annya poor Ed, poor Al i'm starting to think that maybe it's an elric quirk-only the older child- to hate their fathers and love their mothers to dead even tough Ed jr doesnt show it yet

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crescent_moony June 29 2006, 04:44:37 UTC
*laughs* Yeah, it's the Elric-kid curse... God, Edward Simon doesn't even break the trend. XD XD XD XD

Ah well. But Benji-papa clearly loved Edward Elric; I mean, he named his first son after him. So he SORTA breaks the chain... kinda... (not really)...

^_~

Thanks for reading! *hugs*

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meia_krane June 29 2006, 17:38:53 UTC
But isn't Ed senior his gay uncle?

and Benji-papa never talks about his father...

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daniela_lynx June 29 2006, 02:32:49 UTC
AHHHHHHHHH!!!

*goes ded.*

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crescent_moony June 29 2006, 04:45:17 UTC
...*looks at ded body*

Um...

*runs from authorities*

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armor_of_guilt June 29 2006, 03:46:44 UTC
-cries-

I love this.

-cries more-

Ed's last journal entry, god, I'm crying. This is so... way to throw a curveball!! This was so worth waiting for and I'm just... yeah. Poor Ed, poor Al, poor Edward, and poor Alex. And poor Annya! I fell so bad for her, but so much for Ed and Al too... I love you! You come up with the best plot things ever! I can't wait for the rest ^^

-brain 'splodes-

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crescent_moony June 29 2006, 04:48:37 UTC
Oh my--! *panics* Don't cry--! *waves boxes of tissues*

Thank you so much for reading... and I'm thrilled that you appreciated the curve ball; I had fun writing it. ^_^ (And thanks for saying chapter seven was worth waiting for, 'cause I know I did make you guys wait this time... eh heh.)

I'm glad you feel bad for Annya; I do, too, and was afraid that people were gonna hate her after this chapter. So far that doesn't seem to be the case, though...

I love you, too! ^_^ *hugs*

*wipes up 'sploded brain*

(I have a Scar Complex goin' on. XD)

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box_of_doom June 29 2006, 03:53:03 UTC
AL is their grandfather? ALPHONSE?!?!

.....wow. Totally wasn't expecting that. And for Ed to suggest it. It sounds more like something Al would have done. (I can see Ed trying to get her to marry himself more than forcing it on his younger brother. @_@)

The whole naming thing still is a mystery to me though, because although Edward is direct and therefore may be the more obvious, the fact that Alexander does begin with Al... and can thus be shortenned down to such... also should probably make him wonder.

Overall... zomg awesome chapter. Made me really interested... the first bit with Ed and Alex made me almost cry...

Can we have more soon? Pwease?

PS: no idea where 361 comes from unless you're taliking about December 27 or something, and I have no idea where that would come in... @_@... but i would love to know! ^^

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crescent_moony June 29 2006, 04:58:54 UTC
Yep. ALPHONSE IS THEIR BIOLOGICAL GRANDFATHER ( ... )

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freedom_destiny June 29 2006, 11:31:05 UTC
Pardon me for jumping in like that.. ;D But hm.. 361? Cell phone?

361=ENA?
Edward and Alex?

:DDDDD Wild guess though.

(Luvs your fic! :D *huggles*)

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freedom_destiny June 29 2006, 15:31:26 UTC
Oh wait I just realised "A" isn't at "1".

Ah well, there goes my theory.. xD

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