Comments | elricest: OMG... took long enough!

armor_of_guilt in elricest

OMG... took long enough!

Jun 04, 2006 01:14

After a very long wait (and very long writers' block), I have finally completed chapter five of my story! Oh my goodness! I wrote a lot of it during my finals, so... it might have a weird flow, I don't know. I apologize for any mistakes that there might be in this. Since it's summer now (wh00t!!) I'm hoping to get a little more writing done, ( Read more... )

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omgyay. :) michirukaiou June 4 2006, 09:04:51 UTC

I was about to go to sleep and decided to check my friends list before I did, I saw you had updated and I was like, "omg I have to read this now. o.o" I didn't think it was weird or random, and it seemed to flow smoothly to me. And as I expected, I loved the chapter. It was very cute and sweet, and a bit sad, as well. I'm being redundant, but I still love Al's POV. I think you've done a very good job with his and Ed's characterization. And the way they interact seem just very... "them". (Sorry, it's late, I'm incoherent.) They have their really sweet, touching moments, but they also have moments where they get irritated with each other that remind you that no matter how mushy can be, they're still brothers and they act like it. Anyway, I'm going to stop rambling because I seriously have no idea if I'm even making sense. My ability to write anything comprehensible leaves me when I'm this tired. ^^; Thanks for updating, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Re: omgyay. :) armor_of_guilt June 4 2006, 09:17:00 UTC

Aww, thanks! I'm glad you decided to read it ^w^

I don't mind being redundant, I'm very flattered that you think Al's POV is good. And yes, with the mushy, lovey moments come the annoyance and the bickering moments too. I like writing those almost as much as the fluff ^^ You are making a lot of sense, don't worry.

Thank you again!!

kittyal June 4 2006, 09:58:14 UTC

i <333333333 u....wow that was a long wait .... but worth it

armor_of_guilt June 4 2006, 17:27:18 UTC

I know, too long for my liking... -points at laptop- Never do that to me again!!
I'm glad you thought it was worth it though! I feel better now ^^ Thank you!

justine_delibes June 4 2006, 11:56:26 UTC

Delightful, as always! I am so enjoying watching this unfold. And I know I've commented on this before, but the detail in Al's narrative is just incredible; the scenes flow together well and are so easy to visualize. WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!

armor_of_guilt June 4 2006, 17:53:54 UTC

Thank you very much!! I love hearing good feedback, so I'm happy you still think Al's narrative is good ^w^ The wait was still too long! Maybe I'll get more inspiration in the long car ride I have to go on tomorrow...
Thank you again for commenting!!

chrstphrl June 4 2006, 17:18:47 UTC

I'm am so glad you updated. This chapter is awesome. You really get into al's head anbd Ed being so tentative and sweet with Al is just beautiful.

armor_of_guilt June 4 2006, 18:02:41 UTC

Thanks! I really wanted it to be a introspective chapter, so it's wonderful you think so! Ed being sweet is awesome, but doesn't that mean he's got something up his sleeve...? Oh well. Thanks again!!

chexmix June 4 2006, 21:27:56 UTC

Aaahhhh! XD *ish so happy that you updated this*

armor_of_guilt June 10 2006, 17:17:03 UTC

I'm happy too! >< Thank you for being patient!!