[fic] Our Environment - Chapter Two

[elric_ward]

It had taken a lot more walking and cajoling from Fons to get Ward out of his sulk. The Edward had been determined to stay quiet and kick every single rock, plant and clump of dirt they passed after their encounter with the strange metal monster with humans inside. Eventually Fons had rolled his eyes in exasperation and grabbed a hand tightly,

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[truly_wished]

So cute!

[elric_ward]

Thanks! C:

[deepgreen18]

Strange, I didn't get an alert on this post. LJ has been skipping on me a bit, lately.
In any case, I enjoyed this chapter. Human/animal interaction is so fun. I love the utter lack of comprehension between species.
Hee! They denned in a bathroom. Wonder what will happen next? Animal control moves them or lets them be? Hmm. I have a feeling it might be the former. Just imagining the confrontation makes me smile.
In terms of mistakes/corrections, I saw nothing funky on first read. Going to read chapter 3 now!