[Fic] Unseen Illusions: Caring Mirage

Jun 03, 2008 17:10

Title: Unseen Illusions: Caring Mirage (Featuring Hound ( Read more... )

28 mirages, fanfiction- transformers

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kendalina June 4 2008, 21:20:14 UTC
These are really good! You have a great way of portraying Mirage! Please post another chapter/story soon!

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eloquencelost June 6 2008, 20:30:44 UTC
Awww why thank you! XP And yes, I just posted a little drabbling for the next prompt today.

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trunks_angel June 5 2008, 17:40:24 UTC
This was amazing and so wonderful! I really love that Mirage was there even though most thought he wasn't and that Hound knew too, but darn - I feel the urge to hug Trailbreaker so freakin' much! Fantastic work sweetie and thank you! *Hugs*

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eloquencelost June 6 2008, 20:31:10 UTC
Sorry it wasn't more squishy. -_- I think injured Hound makes Mirage incapable of being squishy. >.>

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shafau June 9 2008, 21:58:19 UTC
(I am so rubbish - I could've sworn I'd replied to this, but it seems I was mistaken. Argh!)

"You and I, till the wheels fall off." That's just... such a Hound line. He's so adorkable sometimes.

I love how everything isn't quite perfect, here - Mirage's issues, Trailbreaker's unrequited feelings (Oh Trailbreaker, you poor, lonely thing)... it's just lovely, all of it. Sad, but with hope mixed in.

It's beautiful - thank you so much for writing it. *hugs*

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eloquencelost November 24 2008, 15:18:15 UTC
I believe there are actually multiple 28 memes. People add and take out prompts I've seen so I just chose the one that seemed to be the most universal. Sorry I can't be more help.

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catraven January 15 2009, 22:51:00 UTC
Very lovely. All of the emotions were so very *real*. It's also sad how many folks go around with misconceptions about and obliviousness to what's really going on ...

Poor Trailbreaker. I just want to gather him up and take away the heartbreak.

Thanks for sharing!

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eloquencelost January 15 2009, 22:54:58 UTC
*nods* Yeah, I <3 TB so much so I don't know why my muses insisted on sending him through the emotional wringer. Good news is, Wyntir Rose and I have co-written a fic that fits into my 'Raj/Hound verse where TB finally gets his own happy ending. *grin*

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