Comments | eloise_bright: SPN gen fic - Family Ties _ PG13 (gen)

eloise_bright

SPN gen fic - Family Ties _ PG13 (gen) - John and Teen!WInchesters

Jan 12, 2008 01:40

Work is, as predicted, insane, but it is Friday, and I did manage to write a wee ficlet. It's much less angsty than my recent fics. Quite silly, in fact.

TITLE: Family Ties
RATING: PG13 (gen)
CHARACTERS: John, Teen!Dean and Sam
DISCLAIMER: Not my boys
NOTES: 1365 words. Pre-series. Written for 50scenes prompt 36 - Fever. Dean's feeling fine. John and Sam ( Read more... )

50scenes, supernatural fic, pre-series

Comments 112

pheebs1 January 12 2008, 02:40:33 UTC

AW! This was great. Give it up Dean, go to bed!! And evil Sammy! *cackles*

eloise_bright January 12 2008, 23:17:27 UTC

Thanks! Evil Sammy in league with scary John. *g*

iamstealthyone January 12 2008, 02:55:32 UTC

*snickers* I so love John trying to be patient and Sam being all gleeful at the end. As for Dean … *snickers again* He’s so cute and amusing when he’s in denial.

Nicely done!

Favorite lines:

“But I’m feeling better.” Dean demonstrates this by shuffling towards the edge of the bed, and manages to fall over sideways, narrowly avoiding a head-on collision with the nightstand.

*snickers* I really like this image.

This time it’s Sam who snorts. “Plan is we send you in first, then salt and burn the ghosts’ corpses while they’re busy laughing their undead asses off.”

LOL!

He looks down, briefly contemplating his t-shirt and shorts ensemble. Obviously not ideal hunting gear, but it makes no sense to waste energy putting on jeans and a jacket. Not that he’s got a fever, or anything. It’s just that it’s kinda warm for January.

*snickers* That’s right, Dean. You tell yourself whatever you need to get you through the day.

Dad doesn’t say anything, which isn’t a good sign, because it means he’s done talking. He just puts out his hand and ( ... )

eloise_bright January 12 2008, 23:19:28 UTC

Thanks. What I love most is that John's patience is almost as scary as his anger. Poor Dean, he doesn't stand a chance with the two of them ganging up on him.

I figure Dean had to be high, or at least have a fever to actually smart off to John.

dolimir_k January 12 2008, 03:16:00 UTC

Man, this made me cackle like mad! A perfect Friday night read!

eloise_bright January 12 2008, 23:19:47 UTC

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!

shehasathree January 12 2008, 03:24:26 UTC

lol! the handcuffs are a fantabulous addition to anyone's bedside manner!

eloise_bright January 12 2008, 23:20:32 UTC

Thanks. I wrote bondage fic and it was gen. *is shamed*

shehasathree January 13 2008, 01:13:14 UTC

*ggg*

thevulgarvirgin January 12 2008, 03:28:52 UTC

You my dear, are AMAZING.

If I'm not weeping with angst than I'm laughing myself silly at your fics, just utterly wonderful.

Every damn word of it, hilarious! Dean's perspective while he "doesn't" have a fever just cracks me up, and John is still the master because not only does he cuff Dean to the bed but he's got pictures of the boys as wee!dorks in his wallet.

eloise_bright January 12 2008, 23:22:49 UTC

Thanks. I do enjoy making Dean sick (not literally, I hasten to add) then having him observe the world around him from his sickbed. *g*

The wee!dorks wallet pics were irresistable. There's a wee!Jensen pic where he looks like someone put a bowl on his head and cut around, and I could not resist using that image in the story.