Comments | eloise_bright: SPN 15 minute ficlet - Explosive

eloise_bright

SPN 15 minute ficlet - Explosive - Teen Dean and Sam (gen)

Mar 29, 2007 00:48

Quick little piece written for 15minuteficlets challenge #188. I'm ashamed of myself.

TITLE: Explosive
RATING: PG13 (gen)
CHARACTERS: Teen Dean and Sam
DISCLAIMER: Not my boys.
NOTES: 580 words. Set pre-series. The boys deal with an explosive situation.

( “We’re dead,” Sam whispers frantically, his eyes almost impossibly wide )

15 minute fic, pranks, supernatural fic, pre-series

Comments 91

regala_electra March 29 2007, 00:14:09 UTC

Ooooh man, those boys are in trouble. Heh. That was great. Awesome set up.

eloise_bright March 29 2007, 22:15:10 UTC

Thanks. I loved figuring out the misdirect in this. *G*

ongiara March 29 2007, 00:18:06 UTC

Haha, I guess that's what Sam meant with the always escalating part in Hell House ;)

And awww, I loved how you portrayed them, cute, bantering partners in crime ♥

Much love for this.

eloise_bright March 29 2007, 22:16:19 UTC

Thanks. Thing is, I can really imagine this sort of thing happening. I love that pranking is canon.

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eloise_bright March 29 2007, 22:17:12 UTC

Thanks. I don't think there's any place far enough to run. Oh those boys are so very dead. *g*

citrinesoul March 29 2007, 00:35:46 UTC

HAHAHA! i remember when the boys in my class did that to my 7th grad english teacher. she actually went home early that day. now that i'm somewhat older i know it was cruel, but it's still a little funny. and totally funny when it happens to daddy-winchester as a backfire.

i suspect that is a very accurate picture of the boys. rock on!

eloise_bright March 29 2007, 22:19:15 UTC

Thanks. It is a terrible thing to do on purpose to someone, but I love that John falls victim to Sam's prank for Dean. You just know John's not going to be concerned about exactly whose fault it is. *g*

Good one, EB yasminke March 29 2007, 01:14:56 UTC

Very funny. Guessed it early on -- must be my childhood haunting me again.

And then there were the chocolate squares...

Re: Good one, EB eloise_bright March 29 2007, 22:20:35 UTC

Thanks. Aw, you guessed it early. I've clearly been channelling your life again. *g*

Chocolate squares. I'm pondering John's retribution... Care to elaborate?

Re: Good one, EB yasminke March 29 2007, 23:40:56 UTC

Ex-lax used to come in chocolate flavoured squares. (Apparently it still does.) You can't use them as proper chocolates because they don't come in "bars" and the name's on them. Oh, and they have a chalky taste to them. Although, they could be wrapped up like miniatures (sort of like Quality Street) around Halloween time.

Not sure how you'd get John to set up the pranks we played: bake them in brownies or chocolate chip cookies.

Or -- they could be used on S'mores, since it'd be dark when they would be making them.

Re: Good one, EB eloise_bright March 29 2007, 23:53:21 UTC

Oh, I like the smores one. I'm just about to head off to bed, so I'll ponder the possibilities.

How cruel would he be? Would they be out camping when he feeds them the smores? Would they not suspect? Just how many months would have passed for him to take his revenge? *rubs hands gleefully* I really like this idea.

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