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eloise_bright

Supernatural gen ficlet - Among Thieves

Jun 21, 2006 00:19

Ficlet written for 15minuteficlets prompt #157. This one's not that angsty. *is shocked*

TITLE: Among Thieves
RATING: PG13
CHARACTERS: Dean, Sam and a bit of John
DISCLAIMER: Not my boys.
NOTES: 530 words. Pre-series. Young Winchesters, maybe 14 and 10. Okay, I have to admit I did run a bit over the 15 minutes. In the thinking time. *blushes*

( “You ate them!” Sam shoves his finger into Dean’s chest and does his best to look menacing. It’s not convincing )

15 minute fic, supernatural fic, pre-series

Comments 36

hinter June 20 2006, 23:49:54 UTC

Hehe, lovely-and adorable. ♥ I love that wee!Sammy can manipulate his family like that. Maybe it's that I've just been reading transcripts, but that went into my head in a very canon format-I'll probably catching myself referring to it as hard fact at some point. :P

eloise_bright June 21 2006, 00:14:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm so chuffed that you found this canon-ish. *g* Dean does deserve everything he gets in this. And I love manipulative wee!Sammy too.

dolimir_k June 21 2006, 00:12:16 UTC

Awww...Sammy covered for him, despite being mad about the m&ms.

Cool!

eloise_bright June 21 2006, 22:39:32 UTC

Thanks! Sammy is fond of his big brother, or maybe he just hates trucking songs. *g*

janissa11 June 21 2006, 00:16:29 UTC

Sammy's the bestest brother ever. Period. *grin* Loved!

eloise_bright June 21 2006, 22:40:48 UTC

Thanks! He is. *g* Plus he gets to own Dean for a month. Think of the M&Ms he's going to be mainlining.

minkmix June 21 2006, 00:23:29 UTC

‘Boys!” The bark from the front seat splits them apart instantly. “If I have to stop this car…”

ha ha! That made me laugh...

Very cute.

eloise_bright June 21 2006, 22:41:50 UTC

Thank you! I think I was channelling my dad there. The unspoken threat of doom was always highly effective. *g*

why_me_why_not June 21 2006, 00:24:24 UTC

aww, I love that Sammy covered for Dean even though he really didn't deserve it! Very nice!

eloise_bright June 21 2006, 22:42:49 UTC

Thanks! Sam is a sweetie in this, and he's so going to make Dean work for penance. *g*