LJ Idol S11: Week 10: Open Topic

[ellison]

Sienna cradled the tinder in her cupped hands like a small bird. She held it near her lips and whispered: fieri. Her voice echoed inside her head in unison with 1000 other voices that whispered with her. A light breeze blew through the forest as tiny leaves trembled all around her. A small orange spark ignited in the center of the tinder, and her

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Oh wow! I want to hear more! I’m rooting for her!

[ellison]

Yay, thanks so much! I am, too! :D

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[karmasoup]

Yikes! Guess the shaded wood isn't going to be as much of a cakewalk as Sienna thought!

[md_meezer]

my thoughts exactly. great beginning to this adventure. Love it!

[ellison]

Thank you!!

[ellison]

Yes, there is more to it than meets the eye! Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

[roina_arwen]

Great beginning, I’d love to know more.

[ellison]

Yay, thanks! I may have to work on it some more, it feels like a fun story to flesh out.

[tsuki_no_bara]

ack, cliffhanger! this is such a vivid start, i want to know what happens next!

[ellison]

Me too! LOL I think I may spend some more time with it, and see where it goes.