LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 27. Prompt: Open Topic

Nov 10, 2014 01:04

Two Sides to the Story"We need to prepare," the elders murmured amongst themselves. The Storm was coming. There were tales of a storm like this in generations past. The only indicator they had was the timing of it all. That seemed to be the Way Things Happened. The young ones looked out over the terrain, seeing no sign of it, not knowing what ( Read more... )

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malinaldarose November 10 2014, 12:21:33 UTC
Love it!

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ellison November 11 2014, 23:43:33 UTC
Thank you!

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bluemermaid November 10 2014, 14:13:08 UTC
I had an inkling of where this was going to go before the reveal but that still doesn't diminish its impact! This is really well done! :)

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ellison November 11 2014, 23:43:44 UTC
Ha cool, thank you so much!

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meridian_rose November 10 2014, 19:14:48 UTC
A fantastic twist in the tale :)

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ellison November 11 2014, 23:43:53 UTC
Thank you!

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millysdaughter November 11 2014, 17:11:49 UTC
Interesting take!

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ellison November 11 2014, 23:44:06 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked it!

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bleodswean November 11 2014, 20:09:29 UTC
Yes! Great juxtaposition between the two "realities".

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ellison November 11 2014, 23:44:38 UTC
Thank you very much! This made me smile a bunch. :D

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