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lettersandsodas in elliotjordan

fic: Their Five Drabbles

Sep 02, 2007 18:52

I don't know what's come over me, but I'm trying to do all 20 eventually.

These were written quickly, so forgive me if they suck.

Title: Their Five Drabbles ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

escapethelight September 3 2007, 00:16:38 UTC

holy hell. I love them all.
Loved accuses. Gah, jealous of your writing talents.

lettersandsodas September 3 2007, 03:57:26 UTC

Thanks for the comment and the add! I'm really glad you enjoyed them.

ohmanhattan September 3 2007, 01:17:00 UTC

I.love.this.community.

That said, my favorite is "Won" because once again, it's so perfectly Elliot giving up/gaining control, as we stated earlier. But also, I really like "Acuses" because it's got a little bit of a playful Jordan.

And "Adminstered," well, that's just HOT.

lettersandsodas September 3 2007, 03:56:56 UTC

And "Adminstered," well, that's just HOT.

Whew! I was a little nervous about that one.

I.love.this.community.

...are mods allowed to praise their own communities? ;)

I'm really glad you liked them, and thank you for saying so.

Their five perfect lines the_girl_20 September 3 2007, 20:02:30 UTC

“Oh, no,” Elliot says dismissively. “She’s like that with everyone.” - I love Elliot's acceptance of Jordan's character traits.

On a whim, Jordan accuses Elliot of still being in love with JD. - That's so something that Jordan would do just for fun.

Some people would be jealous if they caught their… whatever Elliot was to Jordan flirting with someone else. - Love the non-use of 'girlfriend' in this one.

Not that she thinks that nothing should happen to Elliot-just nothing with major professional consequences. - And I love that she makes sure that Elliot's professional record remains unblemished. If not her ass ;)

Elliot shrugs. “Don’t know. Because I win when it counts?” - Elliot wins big!

These are fantastic! Perfect little character glimpses. I eagerly await more.

Re: Their five perfect lines lettersandsodas September 4 2007, 13:17:43 UTC

Thanks again for the detailed feedback!

If only schoolwork and marking papers would stop interfering with my writing, I'd have more out a lot faster. :)

michellek September 4 2007, 03:16:00 UTC

These are so good. I especially love the final line in Restaurant and the whole of Won. Just awesome.

lettersandsodas September 4 2007, 13:14:14 UTC

Wow, thanks. I love your E/J stuff (and all your Scrubs fic), so I really appreciate the comment :)