Coming Out

[outsidethebx]

Title: Coming Out
Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Scrubs
Pairing: Jordan/Elliot
Summary: 990 word continuation about Elliot's phone conversation with her mom. Her Phone Call
AN: bank_farter is my lovely beta. Written for passion_perfect Theme #2 Missed Opportunities
Archiving: Sure
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I have no ownership of Scrubs

Comments

[mno4k]

I can't belive no one has commented on this yet, it's awesome! I love Elliot's characterization, I think it's spot-on. Anyway, hope you can continue this, Cheers!

[outsidethebx]

Thank you so much. I've only recently ventured into the Scrubs fic arena, so I very much appreciate any feedback!

[ohmanhattan]

Hi, I'm SO sorry I've not commented on this. I'm having issues and I just wanted to distance myself from anything relationship-related! Oy. Here we go.

You've got Jordan down perfectly. I love the Little Engine line. So great.

I can see Elliot doing that. And coveting handcuffs. God, I love the Elliot/Jordan dynamic so much! It's so effed up, yet so completely right.

"whatever this is" .. that pretty much describes it.

[outsidethebx]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Bank_farter has been bugging me for weeks to try my hand at Scrubs, so I was a bit nervous to post it. I'm always grateful when people point out specific things they like (and dislike) about my fics, so thank you so much for taking the time to do so.

Oh, and I hope your issues work themselves out.