The Wish [2/4]

Jan 01, 2009 18:56

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dizzydaisy2393 January 1 2009, 21:22:55 UTC
I had to read this three times to be sure I read it right. Oh my poor Kevin! I do did not see this coming. You left some clues and I so hope I have drawn the wrong conclusion about how badly he is injured. I shall be chewing my nails to the knuckles until the next update...

It has been a long time since my heart has ached this much from a story. Thank you!

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ellie_fic January 2 2009, 17:06:52 UTC
You're very welcome; I'm really glad that you're liking this.

I did indeed leave some clues - I'm told it's one of my traits when I'm writing, to leave little signals as to whatever's coming. Which is bizarre, and completely unplanned, because I don't know the ending to anything I write, until it hits me full-square in the head and announces very loudly that it's done.

Next update should be up by the time you (probably) read this!

:)

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zxully January 2 2009, 01:06:14 UTC
Oh god, I loved this part... *is a huge fan of angsty!Kevin*
Please, please, update soon. I hope Kevin's going to be fine... *pets him*

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ellie_fic January 2 2009, 17:07:19 UTC
Heh. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

:)

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littlextinyxbug January 2 2009, 02:52:27 UTC
You are amazing. The way you write = freackin mindblowing.

I hope kevin's ok :(

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ellie_fic January 2 2009, 17:08:11 UTC
Wow. Thank you *so* much for the compliment!

I'm glad you liked this, and... well, you'll just have to read the next part to see whether or not Kevin's okay, won't you?! ;)

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bananahater336 January 2 2009, 11:29:24 UTC
This is one of those stories I read very, very slowly, because there are so many perfectly-NEEDED details that I don't want to miss. I read the last five or so paragraphs three times.

Nick in this is wonderful. I love when he's the grown-up one, the one who takes care of them. Part of me wishes this was longer than four parts, because I sincerely love it. <3

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ellie_fic January 2 2009, 17:11:12 UTC
Okay. Seriously, does this mean it's incomprehensible? Is it a bad thing?

I don't know why, maybe because of my own family's dynamic, but I just get this impression that Nick *is* the one who takes care of them all - and that he thrives on it, too!

Oh, bless you, hon! It was only meant to be three parts long - but then smut got involved, and erm... yeah. It sort of demanded a fourth part all for itself, and who am I to deny it? (*g*)

Really glad you like it, though!

:)

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peachchild336 January 2 2009, 22:19:28 UTC
Oh, god, no; that's not what I meant at all.
It's just so good, and so involved and carefully-written, that I take my time.
With other stories, I would just read it. Only when I really, really like it, and want to get the full effect, I go back and reread, so I know I'm getting everything I can out of it.
I'm sorry; I didn't mean that to be confusing; it was meant as a compliment.

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ellie_fic January 2 2009, 22:22:06 UTC
Then, thank you kindly! :)

It's just that I'm very aware of my ability to waffle for England, and I try really hard not to let that creep into my writing. But, inevitably, there are times when it does - and I tend to remain oblivious to its presence until someone points it out to me.

Faults, I have many a few...

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ellie_fic January 4 2009, 09:50:02 UTC
Thanks!

Although I don't know about epic...!

:)

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