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elless18

A Little Broken But Reparable

Feb 18, 2011 13:31

Title: A Little Broken But Reparable
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: PG or something? There's just some swearing
Word Count: 858
Disclaimer: I can only fantasize that this is really going on. Alas, it's not. Unless it is, and if so, I want photographic evidence, dammit!
Summary: AU. Jared and Jensen have an argument.
A/N: Written for a prompt from aythia after ( Read more... )

oneshots, rps, j2 au

Comments 31

wolfrider89 February 19 2011, 20:16:48 UTC

*happy sigh*
I loved this! So glad aythia recced it!
I don't know how, because they're fighting pretty much the whole fic, but it still makes me happy. I guess it's all the love shining through. :)

elless18 February 19 2011, 22:51:35 UTC

LOL. Their love always shines through, even when they're both being assholes. :p

Thanks for reading! <3

ms_soma February 19 2011, 22:51:46 UTC

That felt very real. Stupid boys. But I know how it goes, a fight about one thing brings up hurts of the past. Love how it ended though - don't go to bed angry, boys! I know the effects are still lingering, but I know they're going to have some wicked make up sex in the morning once they've slept on it.

elless18 February 19 2011, 23:05:05 UTC

Thanks! <3 I'm glad it felt real to you. And LOL, of course they'll have amazing make up sex, loud and rough. ,)

ms_soma February 19 2011, 23:12:12 UTC

I thought when they wake up, it would be all soft and slow and quiet and forgiving sex... then maybe loud and rough after they've showered (together, duh) and need to get at each other again.
*happy place*

elless18 February 19 2011, 23:27:55 UTC

That is a VERY happy place!

dodger_sister February 21 2011, 06:45:45 UTC

This was so sweet and perfect and I love that Jared stills kind thinks he was right but he feels too bad about upsetting Jensen to keep fighting. Very realistic. I love the description of the way they fit together on the couch!

elless18 February 21 2011, 07:19:57 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad it seemed realistic to you. <3

jodean80 February 21 2011, 22:00:58 UTC

Someone always has to say sorry first. Even if he was right. Or, he thinks he was.
Liked that Jared went to spend the night with Jen on the couch just to be together.

Lovely story. Thanks for sharing.

elless18 February 21 2011, 22:26:43 UTC

Thanks so much! <3

jespretender February 22 2011, 12:53:42 UTC

That was lovely. Aw.

elless18 February 22 2011, 23:09:25 UTC

Thank you! <3