Breaking Out - Chapter One

[elleian]

Title: Breaking Out
Author: elleian
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Warnings: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Fluff
Disclaimer: Unless otherwise stated, everything is owned by JK Rowling, Warner Brothers, etc. I do not make any money from this and I have no intent to infringe anyone’s copyright.
Summary: The fighting may be over, but the war

Comments

[kurla88]

Yay, fun.

[elleian]

*grin* Definitely!

[sassy_cissa]

Woo Hoo!! A new story from you! You have me intrigued, to say the least! Looking forward to Sunday already!

I love that Harry feels demons from what he had to do to kill Voldemort. And Hermione should feel bad...it was a mean thing to do, but anything to get H & D together! lol And don't worry about the missing fluff...I'm sure you'll use it as it fits the story!

[elleian]

*grin* I'm not sure my word processor feels the same way, I think it is going to want me to give it overtime soon! ;)

Yep, somehow I can see Harry being cut up about it even if none of it was really his fault at all. I can't decide whether Hermione should have done what she did or not: one one hand she is betraying his trust and making him feel worse than he already does, but on the other hand she genuinely wants to help him and this is the only way she knows how to.

And yeah, I'm sure the fluff will show up later on - you know I'm too much of a sap for it not to!

[break_myself09]

!!!!!

New fic!!!!

*rushes off to read*

!!!!!

[break_myself09]

*gasp*

elleian writing angst? Is that a sign of the apocolypse? ;)

I ♥ this so far! Wtf, is up with Harry? That kid is seriously Emo. lol.

Can't wait to see what's coming up!

[elleian]

:D You really made me laugh with that one! Once again I am getting strange looks from those around me...

Yes, Harry is having an emo phase. I promise no cutting, though! ;)

I'm glad that you like it! ♥

[enchanted_jae]

I like it! And it's good to stretch your wings as a writer and try something a bit different.

[elleian]

:) Thank you! I thought it was time to broaden my horizons slightly, as you said. Sometimes its good to try something slightly different.

[anonymous]

Damn it, I hate it when Ministry or wizarding world tries to manipulate Harry's life! I feel so mad right now at Ministry and absolutely mad at Hermione! I feel sick at thought of being forcefully taken somewhere and being captured against my free will. It's just so horrible! Every time I come across this story line, where Harry and Draco is closed for some time together, against their wants, and without hope to get out, I hope they will break out and make everyone who captured them to regret. And, hey, your story is called "Breaking Out"! So I will hope Harry and Draco will unite their powers and break out from their trap, and they will go to Ministry and set some laws and programms in fire! I hope Ministry and Granger will regret of their action! Very, very much. Oh, I'm so MAD!
I just sure that you can't make a person happy by force. You just can't.
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Argo, looking forward for next chapter (and break out!) :o)

[elleian]

:) This is exactly the reaction that I was aiming for! The Minisry are so manipulating and they manage to get others on side, even normally sensible people such as Hermione. When I was writing how trapped Harry felt I got the sense of just how frustrated and, above all, helpless I would feel if I were in his position. I would want to rant and rave and scream at people to just let me out. I'm not quite sure exactly what path this story will eventually take, but the title 'Breaking Out' will definitely have significance! ;)

I definitely agree with you; you can't make a person happy by force. Even if you are doing it with the best intentions in the world, you simply cannot make someone happy like that. Happiness is something that everyone must find individually and if it is with the help of others then it should be because they offer and you want to take their help.

Thank you for your comment!