[Fic] - Advent Challenge: Gundam Wing - Day 1

[ellebefore_emm]

Title: To Give Than Receive
Pairing: None
Fandom: Gundam Wing
Characters: Duo Maxwell, Father Maxwell, Sister Helen
Rating: G
Words: 750
Written for the adventchallenge with the prompt: Father Maxwell always said that Christmas was about good will towards men, and not about presents; but Duo still wondered why Santa never visited the orphanage (from tealrose39).
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Comments

[tealrose39]

WAH! so much angst!! Duo wondering if he was bad *tear* The ending! Sister Helen is pretty awesome, actually. Loved it!!!

(because i'm a bitch - very, very minor typos: “if they weren’t good, Santa won’t bring you any presents”. | fondly at duo’s sullen | itself.”It wasn’t)

I like your foreshadowing with the x-mas story and my favorite phrase is "while those who had nothing received just the same."

[ellebefore_emm]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it even though it was fully of heart break (why did this end up being DAY ONE??). I am leaving the tense change in the dialogue that you indicated because it is supposed to be as if it is being heard within the context, it isn't just a repeated quote.

[ellebefore_emm]

I just read that quote I mentioned and realized it didn't even read as I wanted it to, so now it is fixed and shiny.

[mahmfic]

f-ing love this.

[ellebefore_emm]

Thank you. Means a lot.