Along Came Alfred, The Sequel (France, England, America) - Pt 4

Sep 20, 2010 18:47

Title: Along Came Alfred, The INTERMINABLE Sequel
Warnings: More sex
Summary: After his encounter with England and France at the most recent conference, Al decides to take France up on his invitation.
Characters: America, England, France
Related fics: Along Came Alfred

Pt 1, Pt 2, Pt 3

Ok, guys, I think that possibly minus an epilogue, this is it.  Woo, ( Read more... )

france, hetalia, along came alfred, smut, america, england, fanfic

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ohh!! myfuckinglestat September 21 2010, 02:13:28 UTC
It's quite weird but people tend to love those they hate, in this case Arthur an Francis were rivals so they looked at each other as equals so this desire they feel for each other is quite strong, but as they both like Alfred they can behave themselves and stop figthing XD

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Re: ohh!! ellamequiere September 21 2010, 02:33:54 UTC
That's exactly what I was going for <3. I'm glad it got across!

(I tried to keep it all nice and vanilla and no-hate, but, uh, it got away from me at the end there ><. I hope the tone wasn't too different from the rest of the fic?)

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Re: ohh!! myfuckinglestat September 21 2010, 02:42:04 UTC
a bit yes, but it's also true that after *ejem* finishing is quite true that Arthur would return to his usual behaviour toward Francis (and he's been molesting and dominating him for too much time in this threesome)

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Re: ohh!! ellamequiere September 21 2010, 02:44:53 UTC
Yes! And also, I think he's in denial about it, but he's afraid that France is going to steal Al. He doesn't quite think he could deal with that.

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kasumicc September 21 2010, 02:51:24 UTC
xD I like how Arthur and Francis can discuss even in this situation. And once again, Alfred proves he's a natural ~

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ellamequiere September 21 2010, 03:11:27 UTC
He's just such a physical guy, you know? I feel like it makes sense that he likes stuff like that.

Thanks for gracing my journal with your presence xDD.

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nakedfiction September 21 2010, 04:03:19 UTC
I think I'm in denial that this will ever be over.

Until the fat lady sings, as they say...

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ellamequiere September 21 2010, 04:32:11 UTC
...I think I am too.

...we'll see.

...maybe this time, it'll stay dead.

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