Comments | ellamequiere: Sex Talk (Italy, France, Germany)

ellamequiere

Sex Talk (Italy, France, Germany)

Aug 12, 2010 20:21

Title: Sex Talk
Warnings: Sex
Summary: "They will go home, and they will start doing that thing, and then they will stay in their bedroom for a very long time, ignoring their friends and making strange sounds...” A tear rolled down Italy's cheek. “And even if their little brothers really, really, really want to play, they will say, No, Feli, I am ( Read more... )

sex talk, france, hetalia, smut, fanfic, germany, italy

Comments 12

mogumogu August 14 2010, 02:34:36 UTC

Just going to say again how much I love this story!

The new bits do give it a bit of a different meaning. Also, I mentally kept track of who was where this time better.

Aw, Italy was awake for the kiss to the leg. That means a lot to me somehow.

There are a number of typos, though

YOU DE-ANONED tinediserp September 15 2010, 06:18:38 UTC

YES.

YES.

AND YES.

Uh. I'll...er...actually read this again, now. Because according to the above commenter, there are new bits.

8D

mykonos2 September 15 2010, 15:36:22 UTC

sorry, didn't read it on the kink meme (the comment above me says you de-anoned), and I don't see a defined pairing. Can you just quickly tell me if there's a pairing or is it an orgy before I read. Thank you.

Sure, dear ellamequiere September 15 2010, 17:10:47 UTC

It's a threesome. Hope you enjoy, if you do decide to read.

Re: Sure, dear mykonos2 September 15 2010, 18:58:29 UTC

ok, read it. xD

The way Italy described sex on the beginning was funny and cute at the same time, haha

"France truly loved every single woman he had ever slept with, and most of the men. He had a lot of love to share. " This was kinda neat. I love this sentence.

“Bite him,” whispered France, insidiously. “He likes that.” omg, this one is just... wow... hot

Also, darling, your Germany is awesome. And I'm a big Germany x France shipper, so I felt excited every time the two of them had an 'interaction' so to say :3

and just when I though the smuty things can begin, you make me laugh with that 'cock' thing xD

Alright, it got very smuty after that, I got to admit haha...

Ok, I'll definitely read 'Duet' now - will review , of course.

reaperangelique September 15 2010, 19:59:34 UTC

....Uh. Wow. Yeah. /epic nosebleed

Fun fact: I don't even like GerIta anymore, which just proves that adding France (and fantastic writing) makes everything better. I loved your bit about nations inhabiting a different world, too, that's exactly my headcanon.

brb reading Duet /runs to do that

anonymous October 13 2010, 02:26:31 UTC

/faint/

Yeah. Faint, just faint, ah nosebleed. Give me a second to regain composure *_* Okay so the story was mind blowing. Great lemon- obviously. But the writing and the actual story are great too. I love Italy's clueless-ness, Germany's attitude, and France was just France. I think you wrote him better than he usually is- more of sly romantic and less of an annoying perv.

The beginning's real cute. I'm glad I followed the link from FF.net^^ (on where I'm the user who Favorited the beginning).

ellamequiere October 13 2010, 03:12:42 UTC

I'm glad you came over, too! Thanks for the review-- it always makes me feel good when people have nice things to say about the rest of a fic, rather than just the sex. Like, "Oh good, you don't only want my fanfic for its body. Or something." xD