THE REAL LJ IDOL FRIENDS AND RIVALS -- WEEK 2.0 -- "Follow Me"

[ellakite]

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Interesting! AW

[ellakite]

Glad you think so!

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[sinnamongirl]

I really like the detail of all 3 of her voices, well done!

[ellakite]

Hopefully that wasn't the only bit you liked...

Seriously: Thanks for the (positive) feedback.

[sinnamongirl]

It wasn't the only part I liked :) I was a little bit on reading/commenting overload since I had to get through the entries and vote before leaving for a weekend trip - I was actually worried some of my comments were coming off terse.

And you're welcome for the positive feedback! It's one of the things I like about LJ Idol so much, is getting to read great things and have so much good stuff to say to the other writers.

[rayaso]

I also liked the three voices. A nicely told entry.

[ellakite]

Thanks! Glad to hear my attention-to-detail is appreciated.

[misfitmanor]

Hmmm... one could almost say he tempted Fate, though, in the end, he didn’t trick her. I hope it doesn’t come to bite him that he didn’t notice she wasn’t as precise as him… one should always be careful with such powerful beings.

karmasoup

[ellakite]

Actually, my Week 1 post explains what ultimately happens to Xerin; I did say this piece is a "distant prologue" to the other one. If you've got the time, go back and re-read my piece from last week... then come back to this one and re-read *EXACTLY* what Fate promised Xerin. Here's a link to my Week 1 piece:

http://ellakite.livejournal.com/534482.html

[eternal_ot]

“I swear that your name will live on long after your death as someone who fought against The Dark Enemy and its minions.”
I like what you did here..:) Cool connection..Enjoyed reading this!

[ellakite]

It's more like what Fate did there... ;)

I enjoy writing about Fate in my stories; She's quite devious, and I enjoy envisioning Her "plans nested within plans" mindset. But it's nice to hear that my readers appreciate that aspect of Her as well.

Thanks for the feedback.