THE REAL LIVEJOURNAL IDOL SEASON 9 WEEK 15 - CHEKHOV'S GUN

[ellakite]

Comments

[thunderflyer]

Very good! I wish I had the technology at hand to send you a corrected copy of this. You need to slowly go over this piece, out loud, and you will catch the words you omitted.

I sometimes feel like I would rather live in the worlds you create than this one.

[ellakite]

This was a rough draft, and I will go back and edit it -- I have until 8 PM ET on Monday to fix this.

[ellakite]

I sometimes feel like I would rather live in the worlds you create than this one.

I know you meant that as a compliment regarding how all the worlds I create seem like interesting places... and I appreciate the compliment very much. However, because you are my friend I feel the need to remind you that all of my worlds are rather dangerous places... and good does not always triumph in my stories. Indeed, for most of my saga that happens very rarely.

Be careful what you wish for. That's all I'm saying.

[adoptedwriter]

The end of this had a real " gotcha" to it! AW

[ellakite]

I enjoy surprising my readers... and I'm glad to hear that I succeeded with this piece.

Thanks for the feedback.

[tonithegreat]

I love the picture you paint at the end!

[ellakite]

Hopefully you didn't think the rest of the piece was awful. ;)

Thanks for the feedback!

[kehlen]

Very interesting. So many mythological references. I enjoyed. :)

Captilization. Following the logic of the piece, it should be
-as ~She~ sensed The Meddler approaching'
and
-He deliberately ignored Court protocol: ~he~ did not announce himself

[ellakite]

Thank you very much for both the positive feedback and the info on the capitalization mistakes I made. I deeply appreciate it.

[jem0000000]

Ah, that explains why it's dangerous....

You have no idea.

[ellakite]

The Weapon only looks like a human. It is, in fact, something far more dangerous than any human, and you know how dangerous humans can be...