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thunderflyer June 10 2014, 02:59:29 UTC
And then what happened?!?

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Huh. ellakite June 10 2014, 04:09:44 UTC
I was expecting a question -- but that wasn't it. (Really.)

So you want to know what happens next? Well, I'll tell you:

* Rock climbing
* Spring turning to Autumn
* People concealing their true natures

And now that I've told you all that, there's no point in my continuing the story. After all, you know exactly what's going to happen now...

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thunderflyer June 10 2014, 05:06:23 UTC
No, I still need you to tell me.

As always, well written, compelling, and I am left wanting more.

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jem0000000 June 11 2014, 08:36:15 UTC
Uh-oh. Hopefully Corey didn't actually need the book to get to the oracle. Although not being able to get there would be one way to lose the dude following him.

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Technically, Corey needs the information in the book... ellakite June 11 2014, 11:24:22 UTC
... but he is able to pick up another copy before arriving at Grunswold.

As for losing his stalker -- Well, Corey has a good head start, but since the stalker knows *EXACTLY* where Corey is going, it's only a matter of time before the stalker will catch up...

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Re: Technically, Corey needs the information in the book... jem0000000 June 14 2014, 07:58:09 UTC
Hmm, if he took long enough to find another copy, the guy might show up, think he'd missed Corey, and go away again. (This was what I meant by losing the follower. Although I assume you've actually probably got that part planned out already.)

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ellakite June 14 2014, 12:01:08 UTC
It doesn't take very long for Corey to find another copy of the book... and Corey isn't aware that his pursuer knows where he's going -- Corey teleported away before the shadow found the book, remember?

And if/when I continue this tale, you'll see that there are complications when Corey reaches Grunswold, so he ends up spending far more time there than he originally expected...

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roina_arwen June 12 2014, 23:00:58 UTC
Ooh, this was very good... :)

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ellakite June 14 2014, 00:09:23 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

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adoptedwriter June 20 2014, 12:47:49 UTC
Interesting with those 3 perspectives at the start. I've never seen that one before. Cool! AW

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