THE REAL LJ IDOL SEASON 8 WEEK 17 -- Bringing a Knife to a Gun Fight

[ellakite]

Comments

[tigrkittn]

LJ-cut please!!

[ellakite]

Will do. Sorry. Work in progress.

[ellakite]

I'm sorry about earlier. All I can say in my defense is that I had a horribly crazy day... And it still isn't over for me yet.

OTOH, the full text of my story is *FINALLY* up... And as usual I'd deeply appreciate concrit. (That's assuming you're still willing to read it; I'll understand if you're still a little pissed off at me.)

[tigrkittn]

Not pissed off! Was scanning on my kindle and it just seemed to go on and on LOL. I need to learn to use ElJay app for that. I appreciate you adding the cut,and I will read your story!

[basric]

Very well done. It was interesting the discussion between the men then then the Master and the blond boy Corey

[ellakite]

Hopefully you were intrigued by the various mysteries that were introduced in the tale -- that really is the whole point of this chapter.

Still, thanks for the feedback!

[jacq22]

Great story and Corey intrigues me....

[ellakite]

Granted, this is only Chapter One... but ultimately, this tale will really be all about Jon. Just giving you fair warning.

Thanks for the feedback!

[sarcasmoqueen]

This was definitely very intriguing. I enjoyed it very much.

[ellakite]

Good to know! Thanks for the positive feedback!

[shimmerdream]

This was really gripping, I enjoyed it.

[ellakite]

"Gripping" is good! Thanks so much for the feedback!