I'm going to state right up front -- I wasn't sure about this piece. I literally came up with the idea for this thing less than 4 hours before the deadline... and there was no way I could contact my usual proofreader to have them go over it before I posted it. I was sorely tempted to take a "bye" this week... and seeing how I'm in Tribe 3, where literally more than half the members took "byes"... I am now officially "running scared".
Ah, well. "The Die Is Cast", as old Julie once noted. Nothing more I can do about it now...
I love reading about the evolution of characters! The more complex and carefully considered they are, the more I enjoy reading about them. As someone who shares a similar background in writing (and continuing love for trying to get it all out in a complete story!), this entry was near my interests. ;)
And they do genuinely sound like intriguing characters. Perhaps you might share some other bits about them with LJI?
And they do genuinely sound like intriguing characters. Perhaps you might share some other bits about them with LJI?
I'm certainly willing, but first I have to see whether or not I survive this week. I'm in Tribe #3 -- one of the two tribes where over half the members took "byes". I'm not feeling too confident about my chances at the moment...
Thanks got letting me know...ellakiteNovember 8 2011, 16:20:09 UTC
This piece literally sprang into my head at the last possible moment, and I know it's at least a little disjointed. But it's good to know that people find the core section interesting.
Always nice to meet a kindred spirit.ellakiteNovember 9 2011, 05:47:18 UTC
One thing I have discovered: sometimes the stories will write themselves, if you let them. And yes, the author may discover some unpleasant things about their beloved characters in the process... but they will be *INTERESTING* things. That's usually a fair trade.
I'm rather happy with the topic tie-in myself. I just wish my muse had given me the idea much earlier; I didn't have the time to polish this piece, and I know *EXACTLY* how rough and stilted it is.
Still, I'm glad I wrote it. It is a topic I wanted to explore.
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Ah, well. "The Die Is Cast", as old Julie once noted. Nothing more I can do about it now...
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Anyway, I'm glad you posted this, since I got to hear those "Corey and Jon" tales long ago and had hoped they hadn't disappeared for good.
As individuals, each of my heroes was about as interesting as a five pound bag of fertilizer.
Some writers never learn the lesson you did.
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Besides, if I really want quick reliable service, I suppose I should actually pay people for their time. [pulls nervously at shirt collar]
Yeah, Corey and Jon are still active in my thoughts... And I view that as a good thing.
Some writers never learn the lesson you did.
And I take great pride in the fact that I am still capable of learning.
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And they do genuinely sound like intriguing characters. Perhaps you might share some other bits about them with LJI?
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I'm certainly willing, but first I have to see whether or not I survive this week. I'm in Tribe #3 -- one of the two tribes where over half the members took "byes". I'm not feeling too confident about my chances at the moment...
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Thanks for commenting.
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As I heard from someone else today, "This is how mythology happens: people talking to each other."
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Thanks for the feedback.
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Still, I'm glad I wrote it. It is a topic I wanted to explore.
Thanks again for your feedback.
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